Do i really have to prove my skill
 

yo, i hope you ready for the cat that makes fatal-distortions, known for killin children like havin fetal-abortions/
each killah equipped with flammable spits to scorch-skins of any other crew who wanna fuck with this sport's-kings/
any crew with something to say needs to just tape-it-shut, cuz fuckin around with us, we'll have your net family breakin-up/
steady-destroy-fucks, you better-avoid-us, murk ya clique so sick you be beggin-to-join-us/
now that genius recruited there aint no way to stop-us, fatal distortions got this whole crew thing locked-up/
already they was deadly and ready to take the crown, DTA, UA, or anybody else wont eva take me down/
lyrically, aint nobody come close to this wreckin-crew, so think twice bout who you steppin-to we just might snap a neck-or-two/
disrespectin-crews for no reason we just invincible, fatal d formed for one reason, spittin to rip-ya-crew/
this-is-who replaced you if you was ever considered the champions, murk you herbs, rematch? you just settin up to get stamped-again/
fatal disotortions spits-str8-heat the way our-lines-on-fire~~
emcee-killer-for-hire..u step we make-ya-kingdom-fall like destructive-empire
we-the-best..put holes-in-ur-head like a worn-out-vest~~
no-crews-can-test...god-watches-ova-us u can tell look at our roster we Absoluutly-blest~~
no-crews-can-fuck-wit-us......like we all some-prude-bitches~~
screw-snitches....thugs-in-stiches-lying-in-ditches like skrawny crack dealers and feins-lookin-for-fixes~~
Commence my wrath with rage and hatred to hate this blatent statement/./
Taint kids with jagged rhythm, I schizm your already Broken Unity/./
Destress Signals, hit you with vengeance to join the Open Mutiny/./
Hung by your Vocal Cords, note the shame, witness the Beauty/./
Carress the aftermath, tear through the ridges which tried to Move me/./
Usually I commence my day with an open vengeance for Vendetta/./
Buckle and Collapse like Titles, Mainly cuz you Taking a Header/./
The Alpha to the To the army, War vets and Cavalry/./
Like your incizers, Unable you to bite other emcees, like causing Cavities/./
Carress my being, my essence soars unlike these other souls Departed/./
Ignite the aura, illuminating the core of the flam but y'all Flame Retarded/./
Catch the Line-Up of Gods, so and so being a playboy on a CONQUEST/./
But I'm an ABSOLUUT GENIUS, hating on those who ain't Ill cuz they lack Concepts/./
This crew is BLEST from Holy Spirits to soar beyond the Walls of JERIKO/./
Cuz when the DEMONs rise like the Phoenix, Seize all your Merits, though/./
Behind the Horizon is a new era for those MENTALLY~ILL patients/./
Until the sky stands Ajacent, Discplacement in Blatent Arrangements/./
Complete the journey to the sky, for the clouds are HateFul MisFortunes/./
Anguish Fills my being with Deportations/
Don't trip-when-you-loose just take it as a learning-experience///
LIke when you sucked your first dick and it burned while hearin-this///
Since you can't find-a-solution to write some lines-of-amuzement///
Cause your mind-is-just-stupid, I'll make you die-as-you-loose-this///
As you leave-with-this-loss, you should tell your ghostwriter you want a refund///
Cause those weak azz rhymes aren't worth the time it took to come here and read-them///
poorless-cheat, more-shyts-beat this MC in his sorcery///
not even his spells can be as rough in this coarse-as-me///getting your forces-beat, flow couldn't be raw if it was horses-meat///
i bring heat, you lack-hell, equipped with your wack-spells///Didn't you know, i mess-sages, bless-stages, while you getting reconfigured like HTML on web-pages///
Reducing your life span by using text-wages and complex-rages///
that will expand and suspend-latex and make you left-wasted///I'll leave you trapped-in-tears hit across half-the-sphere///
Put my azz-in-ears and shyt through your atmosphere///
In-this-braul you're-sent-to-fall with all that shyt-you-talk///
To extend-your-lost as written-flaws and then-you're-tossed///
Ungloved-punches-will emerge your blood dripping tongue-through-your-lips///
The rapture-of-these-flows will capture-your-weak-hopes///
Thinking you're "tight" cause you got you're gay azz-in-some-speedos///
I shatter-your-ego with strikes-that-bust inside-the-crust///
As lightning-thrusts turn your rhymes-to-dust and your mind-to-mush///
Designed-to-fuk and your number in the line-is-up///
Guide-some-nuts through your eyeless-ducts///
now I'm flowing inside-your-blood Your starving-plans-to-win won't make you the hardcore-champion///
As I turn you out you're now the yard-whore-that-I-pimped///
You're in the ring-with-a-champ .... touch a mic and get beat-with-the-amp///
You'll be-in-the-stands unconscious as you pee-in-your-pants///
Your lease-in-this-camp is suspended soon-as-you-register///
A fool-with-a-verse has no choice but to loose-when-he's-served///
Using-rehearsed lines and you still don't-have-a-chance///
My flows-crash-a-dam and barry you in a snow-avalanche///
Turning liquid-to-ice with this-device ripping-your-eyes///
To get-in-your-mind and mix-up-your-rhymes freezing you with spit-down-your-spine /
i'll send you a digit,and believe me its not my ladys...
affend you like a migit,to lead you not to breath~G
slap 'sickness' wita stick~cuz....he wont mind his own business,
i infringe~quick.....finna 'SPIN~clips' like the 'MAGAZINE~bitch'...
you cant see~this...makin ya knees 'BUCKLE' like a 'PILGRIM',
i chuckle cause im~winin...leave you 'ina~RUT' like 'OJ~SIMPSON'...
you stuck and im grinin....you end up 'ran~threw' like 'porn~stars',
dont morn~in~my~bars....like 'child~abuse' cause i hit ya 'to~hard'...
leava bruise~anda~scar...stab~you wita 'LIGHTBULB' so you can 'riot~in~WATTS',
assault ya wita 'JAGGED~EDGE' cd or maybe just 'throw~ROCKS'....
fold~or~get~shot....its like ya went ta 'Louisville' when i hit ya wit~the~'slugger',
knock ya jaw outa location.....so im making this 'retard~stutter'....
there is no~other..you'll 'regret~the~day' like when you 'puss~outta~battles',
beating me? nah...ur 'outweighed' like tryin to 'crucifix~cattle'....
ur uselss~an~fat~fool....now niccuh 'GIMMIE~ROOM' like 'FAT~BITCHES' in 'HALLWAYS',
now ima embarrass you in front~of ur 'peers' and 'CALL~IT~A~DAY'

fucken ayte why aint there any feed back? damn this site fucken sleeps on peeps work

it wuz stright nigga,nuttin eye poppin,....Way to long

yo this piece was dope no doubt, that HTML line was sick, but make yo rhymes shorter thats why u got slept on, yo lyrics r dope no doubt, u got skill, but i only read 1 of yo pieces, dont use all yo rhymes in one post, cuse then it will get too big n u WILL get SLEPT on

Yo man this is pretty nice but WAY too long for Open Mic dogg!!!! It will probabaly get slept on for that reason and u have got slpet on already.. but the lyrics and rhymin were all good, I only read half coz its a thesis haha but what I read was good, keep elevatin man....

Peace Out Yo!!!!

There was no point to this drop at all.... you just babbled on.... try to have a story line or something ..... i am just not feeling that "bang, bang, shoot um up, die slow" shit

if you hearin this now, you betta reply
to these lyrics im spittin, this shit'll make you cry
like when yo moma finally told you, dat she was a whore
and when your dealer broke to you dat u couldn't score
cos your a faggot, dawg i bet you got a maggot
like when you shagged that slapper i bet you couldn't hack it
ive only just started but i betta be splittin
cos there aint no fuckin comeback to these lyrics im spittin

.Hot Spit.
 

Can't say anything them other niggas didn't already say. I gotta follow up with the fact that the joint was way too long though kid... you should work more on shorter threads, that way you can have more posts.