Backwards
 

turning the tables twice/
living life to the fullest/
doing all i can cause i aint dodgin no bullets/
but everythings backwards in this life we live /
everything crazy going everywhere but right/
we fight and struggle to live but dont have enough foresight/
all the worlds strength is going in vein/
all dreams are wasted going down the drain/
some say i speak political i'm just spittin a rhyme/
but just spittin leads to a whole page/
then u run out of time/
drink some wine mix wit 99 bananas/
wash the worldly thoughts from my head its like a bananza/
now that i think about it i'm going bananas/
i can't waste time trying to fold this fuckin bandana/
whats the point in trying to find the truth/
it's like going to the bar just to set at the booth/
but you wanna know why i spit bars so ruthless/
i'm a true gangsta the same reason you walkin round toothless/
you say he's just paranoid but i say i'm just multi-talented/
why when i spit the whole room get off balance/
i'm tryin to stay focus on a world so backwards/
and spit gold bars makng a lame gymnist do backflips/
and president clinton re-elected as soon as my disc hit/

drink some wine mix wit 99 bananas/
wash the worldly thoughts from my head its like a bananza/
now that i think about it i'm going bananas/
i can't waste time trying to fold this fuckin bandana/


u should take all that out...

This could have been something tight but a couple of things thats missin'. It's good that you touched on some social stuff but then at the end it seem like you contradict yourself. Your flow is kinda basic too. It's aaight, you got talent just keep spittin'