.Syllable Suicide.
 

I'll show up in a surgical mask, murdering raps//
Servin' these cats from all angles, but from the vertical last//
Burnin' it fast, i'm certain your wack cuz i've never heard of your ass//
Get verbally smashed, these words will be trash, and you stay garbage//
My blades sharp tip leaves lames scarred with shaved armpits//
Another slain artist, when my brain's started, I shall remain heartless//
I strain cartiledge with insane hard shit and rhinoceros rhymes//
With the hottest of lines, from the top of my mind//
That got the precision to hit the breaks, and stop on a dime//
Concocting designs, without a fucking glock or a nine//
But still bitch, E can lock ya demise//
It's a shock to ya eyes, to see me ripping, flipping and kicking it now//
Sit with a crown, i'm sick with the sound, quick to leave a bitch with a frown//
Spit from the mouth, to throw a clip in a clown, i'm the mother fucker everyone listens to now//
Get hit with the rounds from my magnum with rhyme passion hating the industry//
Lines smashin', dont try rapping, can't be contained it's a mystery//
Ya mind is lackin', i'll die laughin', blazing the sickest weed, training and splitting teams//
Your lame and you're history, your brain isn't shit to me, you're disturbed and stupified//
When I spit words, you will die and we watch as this nerd gets crucified//
Sick verbs will move inside while the spliff burns to lose ya mind//

this was good nuff said

I like this piece... It had a good flow and some nice multies..

I liked this line:

Your multis are on point and it flowed really well. I'm not gonna lie though, in my opinion I started to get disintersested from the blah,blah, battle rap style on this drop. But skill wise you sick. Keep spittin'

not bad bro....the multis is what made the whole thing better....
^^

great multis. nothing new said. but good flow. the part about sacarred and shaved armpits was funny as hel. less hard, more humor, and i think you could go platinum.(lmfao)

.Good Lookin' Out.
 

Thanks for all the comments... keep uppin' this joint.