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roux 04-01-03 11:50 AM

doo doo
 
burn down the record store with lyrical fire/
political constituants just another liar
rubble in the street from the bad ass beat
feet greet the heat run back retreat
super educated i 'm smarter than spock
if i was diseas i'd be super pox
got no nine & I got no glock
all my cash fits in an old gym sock
poorer than before with a gohnorrea sore
sleep on the floor, got bugs galore
couldn't get to shore with a boat and an oar.
no such luck just cursed as fuck
my future plans include not much
physcic hotline network LOSER
large phone bill in my very near future
pesi challenge took it lost
fizzled out with my wires crossed
wanna be, a ghost buster
first black president owner of hustler
half with it, half wit,
half finished high school
cool as a fool in a swimmin pool



more like jumprope than flow. got a block y'all

ShyIce_Ty 04-01-03 01:01 PM

WACK AS FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NO STYLE WHAT SO EVER

Av1r3x 04-01-03 09:19 PM

i guess tha title shoulda tipped me off...:rolleyes: Man u had no creativity,jus spittin wuteva rhymed and it sounded like nonsense.Up ya structure and ideas,then maybe u can get sumwhere.Stay ^
-Avi


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