Mind Invasion 613
 

THIS IS A MIND INVASION.
THESE LINES ARE INFILTRATED
BRED FROM A GODS RIB
i'M DOIN' THIS IN CAFeS
CAUSE i DON'T LIVE IN CRIBS.
i WALK THE EARTH//
LIKE JUELS IN PULP FICTION DID.
i'M LEAVING YOPU IN 'LONDON DUNGOENS'
LIKE 'THE MISFITS' YOU KNOW THIS IS A 'HORROR BUSINESS'.
i HAVE YOU STRUGGLIN' WITH SHIT YOU WROTE IN SIXTH GRADE WHILE i HEAR DISPENCIN' SHIT I THOUGHT OF RIGHT NOW... AND ITS GREAT.
i'LL PENITRATE
SEVER YOUR HYMAN
CAUSE I KNOW YOOUS A BITCH SO WHY THE FUCK IS YOU RHYMIN'?
i'VE BEEN IN THIS FROM THE GO-GET
i JUST GOT A P.C. AND THE INERNET .
I'M USING IT TO GET TWICE THE RESPECT
THAT i THINK I DESERV TO GET.
REACH DOWN YOUR NECK WITH THIS MICROPHONE.
AND DISECT YOUR SOUL WITH MY RICHOUSE POEMS.
i'M HEAR USING 'BOEMS' TO PERCULATE AND SIFT THROUGH THESE 'BOARIN'S'
WHO TELL ME NOTHING BUT HOW TO RAP PATHETIC AND KEEP KIDS SNORIN'
THEY LOOK AT YOU AS AN M.C. AND THINK OF 'LAURN GREEN'
i AUGHTTA SMACK YOU WITH THE SYMBAL FROM THE CBC
CANADIAN
OTTAWA ELITE.
NEVER PUTTIN KIDS TO SLEEP.
UNLESS i'M SPITTIN YOUR SHIT JUST TO PROVE THAT ITS WEAK.
PEACE

yo that was aight man but culd use alotta work on the real. had sum parts that showed sum skillz but then there were parts that lost me on ur flow and rhyme scheme, keep postin man

YO THAX BUT i NEED SOME SPECIFICS. LIKE WHERE IS THERE A LOTTA WORK NEEDED? PEEP BAK

Yeah this is good but not tha best I've read from you. keep postin'...

yo I thought it was sick but like REZINE said i got lost on the rhyme sheme