this is.....
 

this is a track that I was hoping//
would be as tight and fresh as could be.
but clearly it is turning out to be a free that sucks does not help me win luv from the sons on rap battles .com I sit around all day and think off better lines to say but when i get to the key I freeze like I was back on stage in my "INPERSON" phase. I'd take it to your face and hit you with a fist that shakes quiver and tremble like I'm in war and I'm expendable.
tha placement of the text is disorted at best.
so bare with me as I turn my words into beats and smack your dome riciouse poems.that will leave you concussed turned over and fucked. I hate because not a person alive has yet to give me a mix tape.
I'll generate and girate untill your convinced your half rate.
displaced faith leads to unscathed hate witch leads to frees that cowagulate-sperate into a good and and a evil mind frame from my fingertips come fame and shoots out shame that bleeds out of any one thats battles gang one. I rhymed one twice the fact is I'm the chosen one so fuck god and fuck his holy son.
thats for you the linez drawn. your a weak human being with tight rhymes that I'm felling but your dependent on the lord. that dosen't want anything to do with any of you. a whole religon based on a gilr that REALLY STUCK TO HER STORY . SORRY BUT YOUR STARTING TO BORE ME AND RECENTLY i'VE BEEN WRITTING A STORY ABOUT A KID NAMED RORRY WHO DECIDED TO RAP HORRIBLY ABOUT HIS SISTER AND HER FRIEND HILLARY WHO WOULD HAV TORRIDLY HORRID AFFAIRS WITH MARRIED MEN AND MEN AT FAIRS. A WHORE WITH SCARED EYES AND A LIFE CURSED MORE THEN A DOSEN TIMES. i APOLOGIZE IF ANYTHING i WRITE IS A LITTLE TOO CLOSE TO ANY OF YOUR REAL LIVES i SPIT LIKE i'M MEETING MY DEMISE. A KEYSTYLE IS A STRONG THING BUT A FREESTYLE LEADS ME TO SING A THOUGHT I THINK ABOUT A BEAT i BOUGHT CALLED PROSTETIC M.C THAT HAD MORE THEN FIFTY KEYNOTES. i'LL SLICE YOU TO DEATH WITH A C-NOTE THAT WAS PATHETIC. i SHOULD NEVER OF SAID IT. i'M SORRY. i;M SORRY. PLEASE DONT MAKE FUN OF ME i'LL STOP IN A MINUTE JUST AFTER i SPIT THE PERFECT FREE.

PEACE (READ IT HOW YOU WILL. TAKE IT HOW YOU WANT IT WAS A REAL FREE i'LL SPIT NONSENCE IF i FEEL FREE ENOUGHTO BE ON SOME SHIT AND SOLEY PULL STUNTS.)LETMEKNOW

CRITIQUE. ME PLEASE FEED ME WISDOM THAT HELPS ME BECOM A WIZARD WITH IZMS i NEED IT LIKE CRACK AND YOU NEED TO HEAR ME RAP IN PERSON. TO FULLY UNDERSTAND MY VOCAB AND CURSE WORDS. IN CONTEXT.