day to day
 

struggle again to get outta bed//
hit the 9 to 5 or no one get's fed
baby's momma out gettin tore up//
while these goddamn bills keep pilin up
incorrect, no respect at home or work, i wanna defect//
but the thought of my daughter keeps my rejected ass in chikitty -check
car still busted, so ima have to bus-it, 3 mile ride//
sittin next to these ruffians
how can it be, the boss is hatin on me//
for bein 3 minutes late but why can't he see
been bustin my ass for so long at this plant//
i wanna get out of this town but i can't
mom and pop can't help with shit//
he's always drunk and she's always sick

the same thing ya manup ahead said I could'nt say it better thats just real shit....happens to everybody at some point in time!!!!
keep spittin tho
*Holler~

Damn well I got this homeboy that can relate to that shit... It reminded me of his life... cause well that's his problems.... nice real life piece.... OoNnEe

thanks .....uppity up up

ups

Yeah man its aiight, basic but to the point, I just got some advice for ya man, stop fucken cloggin up Open Mic, you got like 6 pieces on the front page, what the fuck is that?? You're wasting space for other people to get replies and its just not wanted man, sure you can ^^up your pieces but not fucken every piece you ever done at the same time....

Peace Out Yo!!!!

They rhyme itself is basic but ya just tellin it as it is. Simple flow and vocab but its effective. way too short aswell u gotta add alot more to it. still will no doubt be a tight piece wit sum more work. anyway cuz RETURN THE FAVOUR check mine BANGKOK BUSINESS im fed up of replyin to every fucka on here and gettin no replies.