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Narcicyst 04-02-03 09:53 AM

Stargate ( time traveling assassin)
 
write my flows in heiroglyphics, mathematically scientific/
resurrect spirits of wizards, assisted by laws of physics/
prolific, relentless, gifted like christians at christmas/
sacrilegious, get viscious against fictiuos cocked religions/
spitting with eygptians, tribal bibles burn thru your vitals/
like pyros and hydro, igniting on spirals in Cairo/
look for me behind you, roaming the zones of the unknown/
where animals feast on the bones and kidney stones on Jesus's throne/
so arm your clones, modified genetic chromosomes/
plus enhance the stars to ride and kill Ceasar and conquer Rome/
so fuck your pagan morals, my paranormal vocals will scold you/
burn the homes of nobles, they yodles, while i'm at it even Constantinoble/
empire embezzitine, i intervene on Heavens mezzenine/
and spread this terror gleam, i see corpses of foes like killing dreams/
even ettiquity, aquatically pressing for requitties/
social remedies to steadily wipe out the enemy/
with vector sensory, laser tazers planted by aliens/
a subterrainian, pladiums, and plantetariums, killers and barbarians/
these are the barriers, heading from areas, next to Aquarius/
locked in the pyramids, the most cresent awaits the essence/
the most heavenly presence, peasants repent the suspensful vengence/
sentence carve the lessons, as i exit the holy monolithes/
Narcicyst is prophecised, and ran off the arceologists....


hope that doesnt get slept on like the rest of my shit..

Evolve 04-02-03 10:07 AM

See this actually wasnt that bad.... you stuck with a theme and kept with it.... i enjoyed it.... peace

Narcicyst 04-02-03 10:13 AM

thanks for that feed back dunny..but it seems if you aint got like 1000+ posts no one wants to read your shit...anyways good looking out...one

the specialist 04-02-03 10:19 AM

TS Is Feeling This...Flowed Lovely...Nice Topic...Might Be Too Complex For Some...But NeverTheLess...Nice...

Narcicyst 04-02-03 10:24 AM

good looking out dunny...i'm tryin to stick to multies in most of my rhymes...about it being to complex i guess it kinda is but thats the way i always spit or try to anyways...thanks for the feedback...one

CHAMELEON 04-02-03 10:27 AM

dude.... that was fresh!!!! for a 11 year old
nah, haha.... I'm just being dumb, I liked this

but stop tryna be so crazy

CHAMELEON 04-02-03 10:29 AM

man that shit was tight seriously

I think your older than 11.... how old are you really? quit lyin

Narcicyst 04-02-03 10:44 AM

^^lol...i'm 22 yo...and i aint tryin to be crazy its just my mind frame when i rhyme...i just like flowing differentally then other people...i try to choose unique topics whenever possible...thanks for the feed back though...one

CHAMELEON 04-02-03 11:00 AM

I knew it!!!!!!!! why did you say you were 13?
just fuckin with people? but why?

BlUnT-MC 04-02-03 11:15 AM

what up.. nice shit, multise were sick, opic was there, damn yo... uppin' this fo-sho dawg..

Narcicyst 04-03-03 04:21 AM

thanks dunny...i'm glad that you liked that one...it's about time kats start reading my shit that i post in here...good looking out...one


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