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illmaticandre83 04-02-03 10:05 AM

Fake ass niggas
 
fake ass niggaz
these is the kind of niggaz
who supposed to ride for you
but as soon as something goes wrong
they the first to turn they back on you
Fake ass niggaz
them kind that say
Niggaz before pussy
but as soon as some come along
they start actin shaddy
fake ass niggaz
Them ones you grew up with always money hungry
but as soon as they get that dough
they no longer yo hommie
:mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :confused:

Narcicyst 04-02-03 10:16 AM

need to work on that shit a lot dunny no offense but that shit was kinda weak...it also seemed to me that it belonged to open mic and not here...you need to make your sentences longer and show more emotion and shit...i liked the topic but like i said you need to get into it deeper and shit...one


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