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Pr0phecy 04-03-03 02:25 PM

Xplicit vs. Vendetta
 
here we go
rules
poll
no d/r crew votes
no line limit
use ya old lyrics ya bitch all u want to
no deadline
no check in...just drop

Pr0phecy 04-03-03 02:47 PM

here nigga
 
This nigga Xplicit think he fit like he "The Iron Man"...
Vendetta got the iron tounge and the iron hand...
I make the final stand...
The final showdowns come round and hit ya(Xplicit)...
As I throw down my gauntlet so switch the picture...
If ya, look in the mirror you bound to get a reflection...
Like with, every action there is a reaction...
with your, dodgy actions you causing negative drama...
And if you know gods law you best watch for karma...

Now I'm a bomb ya...
Xplicit Running his trap like tacks...
You think you floating on the cream...
You and your "rat pack"...
While I'm...
take that thought back now lets dwell...
How I should lock you... like jail cells so my crew can exhale...

I'm a bull and (Xplicit a matador)...
I'm seeing red nigga...
(You outta swords)...
I'm a target like...
(Dartsboards)...
Xplicit floating in space like astronauts...
I started off last but now I'm first...
while ya shakin I cut off like...
umbilicals at birth...

Xplicit 04-03-03 05:25 PM

aight, this nigga finally wanna post after a week, but here it is

Im finna kill this bastard......................

i come through with that illuminating shit, to shine through you and kill ya
i eliminate the competition, you cant compete
ive been rhyming as long as you’ve been beatin ya meat
thats been 15 years,
fuck wit X you’ll be leavin wit tears
im the teacher you the student, listen up clearly,
you finna get a lesson, im teachin you
ya ABC‘s and 1,2,3 ‘s
fuckin wit me you aint gon’ breathe
u little rodent crawlin around wit all them damn free post
u finna get somethin u gonna regret the most
talkin about other niggaz, im finna cut at ya throat
im spreadin jealousy all around you like butter on toast
Man u like a damn ghost to me, always talkin shit
just because i haven’t seen you in three weeks you think you legit
Man I aint gonna fuss, im just finna get a casket and bury you
and leave ya ass gory too,
they aint even gonna clean you up,
the chronologist wont say shit
all he’ll know about you is that you never got clit
im like fuckin Zeus throwin thunder at ya
go on ahead and get ya homies, u’ll still be outnumbad
nigga, never challenge me again, are you fuckin crazy?
eat some porkchops, and maybe yo ass can battle me ( twitch needs some protein, but cant because he’s muslim, and they cant eat pork)

Aight Explanations: Chronologist is a person who deals with dates and events..................Illuminating is like really bright light that can shine through things...............and like i said Twitchin is Muslim, so he cant have pork, but he needs some protein so if he had some protein in his body he might have a chance.

Xplicit 04-03-03 05:28 PM

yeh, no votes from people from ca

Pr0phecy 04-03-03 05:32 PM

lets hit them votes ya heard....NICE OLD POST X

DEFIANT 04-03-03 05:44 PM

Both were good verses: Let me break it down

Vendetta Good Start with this line:

This nigga Xplicit think he fit like he "The Iron Man"...
Vendetta got the iron tounge and the iron hand...
I make the final stand...

Xplicit your flow is hard to follow because your lines didn't always rhyme but I still liked it but I have to vote for Vendetta his verse flowed more......keep it up though guys keep elevatin'

vote=Vendetta

chronicpeddler 04-03-03 05:52 PM

vendetta did flow alot betta, tha other cat had some nice punch lines and got me laughfin, but no flow- sorry think x shouldve won except his didnt flow

VOTE=vendetta

Pr0phecy 04-03-03 09:14 PM

2-0 me....thanks...are u guys doing the poll??? anyway..elavatin'...more votes..^upn'

Xplicit 04-03-03 11:26 PM

hey i said something ^^^^^^^^^^ about ca votes, that aint cali votes that is our school, just incase there was a mixup aight, can we get some votes up in here?

fgee 04-04-03 07:36 AM

i'm going vendetta on this one but the only cos ur flow was better than x-plicit and ur first verse was the best in the battle
punches were quite weak and flow was pretty poor from both but x-plicits was worse just need to work on that

Pr0phecy 04-04-03 08:54 AM

3-0 me uppin'^^^

Pr0phecy 04-04-03 10:16 AM

more votes please and poll to the right person....why does xplicit have one vote...he never got a vote...unless someone voted and didnt post up on this thread...^uppn

Xplicit 04-04-03 10:19 AM

thats what probaly happened, you dont have to put your vote on the page, you can just put it on the poll, i would like yall to put it on the page, but the poll votes are the ones that are counting

BlUnT-MC 04-04-03 10:38 AM

vote = vendetta....

It flowed alot better... punches were more origional.. an' I liked the last couple of bars in the comparisson thing.. I been experimenting with that l8ly....

Pr0phecy 04-04-03 01:10 PM

4-0 me uppin^^^


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