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*With a broken life*
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I thought everyone was makin up their words as they wrote along?....guess ama freebust, be da one not to reherse~....Express how u feel-
With ya' own words~ A heart full of scars with a soul covered with holes Doesn’t do much for my depression, except that it takes its tolls After each and every heart break that tears me in two Gluing my heart back together again until my love sinks through A mind full of regrets that only helps to haunt my past Wondering everyday if this day will be my last To take me away from these thoughts of a dying tomorrow Trying to cope with every regret that seems filled with sorrow A soul which no longer exists for it has been taken apart Piece by piece like the scars show with my broken heart And every piece that has been broken off gets left behind Lost in the memories of pain and depression that rages with time Every step taken ahead, is a foot towards the end For soon enough, life itself will be almost impossible to mend And nothing of myself will soon be left, because they’ve taken it all Leaving not even pity behind that could have saved me from the pics on the wall The lights have been turned off, happiness has slipped away Into the nights darkness which only sheds light on my day That makes me walk into a wall that shows me so much more emotion Than I could ever have seen when I drank their sour love potion As hope turns the other way, my love can’t help but croak For every part of my body is useless, life is now broke… Enufff...i'm a ghost...............PEace |
nice poem....i was feelin it from beginnin to end...keep onit!!
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THnx Shiz....atleast someone aint sleeepin up in RB shit...
Uppun |
i enjoyed the piece i think its nice to read a poem that rolls smoothly and is easy to comprehend--nice work keep it up--check out rapture light when you get the chance. thanks
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THnx deacon ama peep yo piece in a minute
UPPUN |
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