im a fool
 

before time set d phase let my life hit your face
rippin d rage off this page crackin potheads off d cage
others think i aint true with these words from 1 to 92
lovin a guy like yo u for sure is hard to do
takin bitches from every1 them thinkin u aint d one
i know how this shit goes nobody fuckin knows
u made me feel better while im in this world of killers and haters
livin and pimpin grindin with players
others was sayin u one of 'em cheaters
seeing u get all mad when i told u d weird feelin i had
fightin 'em all up in my head as m layin in my bed
tryin to organize my thoughts relivin each moment of us both
never hear from u now i kno i was a fool of me lovin u
believin words from ppl as d time has pass
lil did i kno every1s kissin my ass
feelin shitty wonderin how they treat me
thinkin if i believed d wrong treaty
feelin lonely but there u was standin behind me
catchin me when i fall protectin from jerks who call
realizin i did a mistake gettin all messed up
and now m here life is gettin fucked up
but still he's there stayin by my side wit a stare
lovin me and showin all his care
i couldnt believe i did sumthin rare
believin othaz thoughts ta share
now i know life it aint fair
cuz he already found the right one pair
any1 would never again my heart be repair
shouldve closed my ears and just live with fears
cuz now all it's clear ..im livin my life now with tears

that was tight!

"yawns" how old are you rookie?

rookie my aSS....fuccin NEWB!!


but yeh Uppin!

i thought that nigga was talkin to me

he yawnin cuz my shit is borin?....fuck that!

uppin still

i liked the emotions/
keep preaching my fellow poet/
peeped your pic/ very cute/
BE PEACEFUL

tha wigga angrywhytguy don't know shyt dawg

yo ish was real coo..I could feel your emotions and your rhyme scheme and structure was real smooth...

fuckin newb don't know what he is droppin

lookin good in d replies....
thanks y'all....
maybe the kid aint no poetry or he aint got shit to do...why he gotta post shit like that but oh well....thanks again...

uppin!

nice

aint much I can say that the others hav'ent this was a real coo piece is was nice to come across sumthin I did'nt have to read like 4 times to understand (then again it could be me...shrugs)
anyway nice piece, it was real coo stay on ya toes
*~Holler~*