jus a Tayste....
 

When our eyes met we became one

one heart

one mind

one soul

what can i say to try and explain how i felt when i first touched you..kissed you..caressed you

words can not be expressed on how you make me feel

expression comes with emotion and emotion deals with feeling and the way i feel makes me wonder if what i feel is real

you are my girl

are you the girl next door or the one in my dreams..or are u a vision of my imagination

no..its real..as real as it gets

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a lil somethin somethin i wrote a while ago-jus put on just so put on..holla at meone

eyo
 

So tell me what ya'll think iight....

take it to poetic scripts

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it doesnt' belong in the compettion.... sorry...

...im sorry too

my bad i didn't mean to put it in this tournament...

yeh it was alright, use some more vocab, and expand a lil' who u talkin about salome

I think i wrote this wen i was dating her ya..this was not a good poem at all i thought it was one of my weak ones