Misconstrued Conceptions
 

I lay and stare into the moonlit sky

where all the mystical starz shine with the utmost glory

have you ever just wanted to touch a cloud?

just to take a piece of heaven home with u?

in realization, i lay beside my lonlely one person bed at night...crying dry tears

tears that cut through my soft pillow and flood it with sorrow

am i really feeling this way or am i just writing?

Ideas spring in my head but i don't hold the key anymore to my heart..it was stolen by the 40 thieves and sold to the black market

feelings obsorb my soul with the upmost serenity

so as i lay asking what is my purpose on this planet..this universe..this third rock from the sun, it hits me....

now the sun shines and i cry..

cry with all my heart...

hmmm...deep...nice flow...weak vocabs tho...and just a suggestion..it would be better if u address it to the readers with more description specifically and not in general...dont take this the wrong way...i liked it and it would be better if u put a little rhyme scheme but all in all it was aiight...and nice line breaks too..keeponit

thanx 4 the comments...i'll take it into consideration...uppin for mo comments ya'll