10 line story
 

life in the projects isnt a pretty~site, people gettin killed just over one silly~fight//

cant even walk outside without seein thugz, kats think they ill cuz they got the new style of lugz//

next thing u know is ur brother layin in the road dead, one bullet to the chest and out the back is enough said//

then ur crew in a brawl over simply nuthin, niggas hustlin to the site cuz they think they got soomethin//

and ur life is depressing and every second ur stressing, cuz niggas get u into shit and they have a hard time confessing//


~out~

uppin fo some feed back

it only took 2min. to key it so i thought it was pretty good

real life feelin' always the best topic dawg...i felt it man it was hott keep elavatin up ya skillzzzz

thanks much luv.............feedback plz

This was cool it was just short i want to hear more about ya piece next time make it longer..1

aight thanks.....feedback needed

wasn't toobad. could improve and could make it longer. nice lil drop though. and for 2 min its pretty good.....also, could you vote on m2 vs unfadeable? thanks ,man

it was aight man, it was good for a 2min piece, but i know u can do ALOT better.. i aint gona put u down for how shortness of it cause that was the point of it.. but elaborate on vocab..
keep spittin, lookin foward to seein some more of your stuff
peace out...

thanks for the feedback

yeah kid it was aight....but jus dont say much in it.....expand it and let more of ya own feelins explode into it