Feedbak on my beat plz
 

im new to the beat makin shit...
tell me if ya think the shits any good
kinda long intro but wtf......

Hifi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=294287&q=Hi

Lofi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=294287&q=Lo

it would be nice if it wasnt the same exact melody from "TILL I COLLAPSE"

but maybe thats just me

.pz.

i never claimed to have invented the melody...... i meant like my ability to use the beat making programs not like make an actual song (trid that...didnt turn out good). sry for ne confusion but i didnt know where tws from

yes...your ability to replicate someone elses melody is good...

and?...

pz

jeez............... nm