Alpha Vs Criminal Intent
 

Rules:

U spit 1st
first to 4 votes winz.....3-0=tko
if no one getz 4 votes by 24hrz the person wit the most votes win
i'all let u pick how many bars
no crew votes
no d/r
no hate votes n blah blah blah blah..........
theres no tyme limit on when to drop a verse but u gotta drop 1st



good luck.....Alpha Ova n Out.....

check it out 10 bar min u know just make em short and sweet duke

go ahead n drop son...

aight
 

a yo

ima spit a hot 16 bars thru ya telly
so many fuckin hot 16s it attracts r/kelly/
a yo nigga is the point that u missin,
i got three numbers on speed dial God, The boss, and the local mortician/
the first to say im sorry the second to say i put holes in his sweater , the third to say pick em up his name was omega/


im hatin this and doin it my way
cuz like smokey muhphucka mess with me u wont make it to next friday/
lookin at u nigga and im laughin i int finished rappin,
this nigga alpha is kinda hot thats cuz im spittin fire at em/
a yo i made ya'll lik a pound of weed i'll blaze ya'll
u hot bu nobody likes yo ass like baseball/
you run from a fight ima riot starter
in rappin you'se the rim im jefferson and carter(check the commercial)/
fuckin with me man u should mark the beat guard ya teeth
im like a infected meat im hard to beat/
i'll pop this fella, stop cock and drop this fella
call me nas the way i went and roc'ed-this-fella-/


outty

ummm.......

Criminal Intent-Where has yo talent went?-just by looking at your Avatars hand i can tell where your time is spent//(jackin-off=look at his avy)
i'am kinda like clark-kent, while you resimble louis lane- you look good on the sidelinez...but when it comes down to it you have no brainz//
its sorta strange how you claim to be a criminal, cuz the only vile act you ever did was 'stole' that pathetic-name from the x-men sential//

The ill shit-i spit-will rip the flesh off your bones-i could blow a kidney stone-and you still would get your words pissed-on//
you in the mist of "dawn" and you getting washed up-until all the dirt in your body builds causing a bloodcot in your lungs and your breath gets locked up//
you spit trashy-and like two fat chickz eattin each other out.... your glocouse cellz are about to get nasty//
Another newbie, talking about shootin me, or what he going to do to me brutally, here's news b, your not gangsta or god so dont claim immunity//
You join that rap battle community to elevate not to get murder and left looking stupidly//
i want you to see, what skillz look like and it dont have nothing dealing with hoez& jewelry, you try to impress voters but they know ripping joggernaughts like you is alpha duty//...........

ups

I Vote alpha cos his verse was more complex an' they punched harder
Vote= Alpha

Vote alpha...
not even close yo

lol ok 2-0 alpha uppin

dat first bar by Alpha was da shit
LMFAO
about da avatar

anywayz u know who da vote for
ALPHA

lol damn thats fucked. Well im also participatin in another battle so maybei'll have better luck in that one.

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o yeah good battle

*daps*

VOTE:Criminal Intent had the flow i say screw punches lol

this battle has to go to alpha, he had some tight punchlines, criminal keep on workin on ya shit a lil bit more

well shit even though the joint is over atleast one person liked me but thanx for the voe blonde and for th critiscm plicit

good battle intent*gives dap*
Can i get sum POLL votes