revenge is tha sweetest joy....
 

he used 2 call me babygurl i was his lady//
but he gon come at me callin me tellin me im shady//
now fo a minute i thought that i wuld be fine//
but i only find my self, thinkin an cryin//
cryin coz i kno his voice im missin//
cryin coz i remembered when we should have been kissin//
but sh*t i aint gon be sad for eva//
shuld I get my revenge n take it out him? NEVER!//
I’ll think of a good plan , u kno manderz, im clever//
Thinking if I should get his ho n f*ck up her up 2 tha core//
Thinking if I’ll i'll feel bad wen my keys scratchin her car door//
ima keep pullin it till theres a line from tha light to tha wheel//
have tha girl shaken , so p*ssed she gon wanna kill//
ill jus watch her frum a distance n laugh it off//
i hope she come at me 2, she wont do sh*t, she soft//
hell yea tha gurl can talk sh*t but wen it come to fightin//
*haha* she cant do it she'll pull my hair start scratchin n bitin//

HOLD UP! *haha* i gotta speak for a minute//
i jus relized wat im doin n this aint singin//
im talkin bout fightin this girl wen i kno she defensless//
thinkin bout my babi boi ~ this is senseless//
i shur in tha hell dont want him back//
no matta how much i care 4 him ~ fuck that//
he did me dirrty n i aint for it no more//
so he can b wit her ~ its ok ~ I heard she a whore//
she mus b nasty ~ I should start callin her “Nothin”//
Coz cant Nothin be compared to be ~ ima one of a kind ~ aint that sumthin?//
Its gon b kinda funny when u relize wat u lost//
Come to think of it, we’ll prollie talk again, but tis gon b my path ur gon cross//
But it wont b easy to get me back, lips glossed, hair tossed, for u, its gon cost//
Its gon take more than a *baby im sorry* its gonna take more than sum apologies//
Im gon have u beggin, on all fours, admittin u was wrong ~ Hands n knees//

a good story
nuthin too special tho
pretty basic but it looks u were
just tryin to get shit off ur chest
so thats cool

PS check out my "7 deadly rap"
thx

:)

yeah this was nice to read,
it flowed all the way thru
-nice lil story

:D :D thanks for tha *positive* input...mos ppl hate! but thanks ya guys!

this is nice but its kind of basic, you did of good job of making your point but when you do deep songs i think you need to paint a better picture of how you feel. up the imagery and it would be alot better.

lol I'm feelin thid most def fam...and MYK'z Sig is Gangsta.....lmao

sick made ;)

Basic But was good and flowed Nicely

like i told some other people i aint one to say whats good or whats not, but i think 4 anyone who likes rap w/ a little bit of depth would like that shit, i know i did, and i think the rap game needs more girls too, i thout it was good, check out mine, " a soilders prayer",

soilder22

fa sho :)

that was basic wasnt really feelin it

mayb u wasnt feelin it cause u didnt understand it ;)