Ghetto life
 

This is a mix of nas and pac kinda shit.
came out decent but u can see that i was drinken that
tang while i was writen but shit is still hot as far as flow and topic
lemme know what u all think!

Yo listen man, This isnt what i wanna be, this is how i am//
This bullshit lifestyle is all i see, Im sayin "damn"//
They say life is what u make it//
son listen thats fake shit//
you get dealt a shitty hand, deal wid it//
stand up and be a man, and youll pull through this shit//
You gotta realize it. brighter dayz is on the way//
You gotta stand tall and say//

hook 2x
yea i live the ghetto life//
but im gonna make it through the pain//
ima make it through the strife//
Ima go insane//
If I dont start doin right //

Ima start workin the day. sleepin the night//
Im not doin this cuz of the life i live but in spite//
Im do this cuz i believe that i can achieve//
This time ima stay like a man, i aint gonna leave//
Stand tall, talk it out, and juss breath//
Dont shout, juss stand there and concieve//


hook 2x
yea i live the ghetto life//
but im gonna make it through the pain//
ima make it through the strife//
Ima go insane//
If I dont start doin right //

Man life gets hard sometimes//
Find your way of dealin wid frustration//
Whether it be juss writen rhymes//
or staight up masturbation//
or through conversation//
or the music on the radio station//
or if ya have to smoke some haze//
all im sayin is betta dayz are on the way//
so calm down, and have it like bk//

hook 2x
yea i live the ghetto life//
but im gonna make it through the pain//
ima make it through the strife//
Ima go insane//
If I dont start doin right //

ight
 

ight this is my opinion i wasnt really feelin this cause tha name of this ghetto life but u really wont talkin bout how ur life is ghetto from what i saw....u were just sayin stay strong and shit like that but wont really sayin and talkin bout how life is ghetto but other than that ur flow was alright.....

well if i changed the title to overcoming the adversity of ghetto life would that make it a better piece. The title isnt what makes the piece. U must not have understood the piece.idk. thanks for the reply though.