KEystyle (judge)
 

raps practically accurate with the intensity/
of an artillery piece significantly decimating cities literally/
left ruins tourin/
for tourists to bring their kids to get in tune with/
their past enigmatic casts a past filled with deceit and contradictions/
top sellin author in the ny posts topsellin books of fiction/
kittens pounce lions labor in the jungle gun humbles tumble rap moonsoons investigation Ahab aimin the harpoon/
to this fat whale enigmatic acquired the blubber of the raps leaving the content to be ignored/
warehouses stormed by agents blazin leavin bodies from the scene makin their guns warm/
6 feet under/
decayin to satisfy an insects hunger/
contemplatin that this was my nigga when i was younger/
shit changed reasons kept to the innermost depths of the soul's labrynith/
in life 20% percent of niggas thrive 30% survive the rest have to snitch/
choose a portion of the proption of this incessant pool/
rhymes egyptin printed niggas cant comprehend turnin on me sayin im the fool?

sorry enigmatic nigga u is fake i know u this internet cats dont know the real shit

your done now real unite

TIGHT SPI WORDPLAY WAS ILL AND CONCEPT REAL

.LastPoet703.
 

Hey kid, I ain't fake... you don't know shit about me son. Just 'cuz you can take words out of dictionaries and thesaurases, don't mean you're an m.c. Postin' every 3 weeks with a hate rhyme on me don't make you an m.c. either. Get on the boards constantly, battle, then we'll see what's up. Keep my name out your mouth nigga, I already tore your ass up in open mic. You wanna take it to a battle?

i dont understand,maybe im stupid or osmehting,but i didnt see no topic in that,the words was nice,but i was lost on the topic,my bad...maybe a battle will sort this out with enigmatic...

to me this sounded like a diss verse...am i right? if it was, it was aiight. seemed like you didnt diss him enough though. if it was just a verse, then it was nice. good vocab and wordplay was pretty good. keep spittin