Perfection
 

This is for everyone who doesnt believe that the feelin should make the rhyme but the structure and flow should.

Im gonna change my level//
from feeling to intellectual//
Ill change from opinions to factual//
from emotion to the actuall//
change distortion to a perfect visual//
begin the abortion of the physical//
cuz cats be too analytical//
this whole site is too politcal//
Too worried about the intricalls//
Not about feelin or emotion//
but about struture and flow motion//
Here is my new notion//
add feelin and emotion and let the rhymes speak//
or else the future of hip hop will be pretty damn bleak//

yeye i felt ur point there dogg
the secret is spit ur feelins and emotions in a way that flows so well that ppl reconize ur shit and feel it ya know
dont take any critisim bad just build on it, if u got feelin and shit there aint no1 can teach that to ya

uppin

UPPIN

yea i feel you nigga keep droppin...nice

was an aiight verse gran thef...propz
bismillah

uppin

yo kinda small (the bars)...but shit it gets to the point....nah mean. Keep your head up, I wont say what they said....you can elevate a lot... I think when people dont give enough feedback it sux so....your vocab was very well done dawg...and the emotion was ok....keep it up
Peace Out and PCP!

i felt yah, if only emotion coul dbe transfered tru words