<--Periods of the Life-->
 

Out the womb...Uncomfertable...Comes out...Crying
Sees Mother...Sees Father...Sucks thumb now...Relying/
Gets guidence...From elders..Some Praise...More Disapline
Being good...No fun...Some days...No listening/
Behaves...But curious...Mannered...But sneakey
Develops...Hobbies...Creates shit...Comes easy/
Sports...Music...Drums..Hoopin'
All play...All day...Fun...Amusin'/
Gets older...Still young...Growing pains...It hurts
Saturday in Streets...Sunday in church/
Boy to man...Girls to women
Women to hoes...Adstanence!?...You trippin!/
Sees life...Trife times...Not so innocent
Has thoughts...Writes rhymes...Jot what I'm livin' in/
Good times...Bad times...Babies born...Men die
This verse shows my 'periods' in life, and words I live by/

Let me just say, I got the insperation fort this rhyme from this writer named Scoop Jackson. He a writer in Slam magazine and he did a story on Ricky Davis form the Cavs, and he did the whole story like that, with the periods and used one word to sum up what could be a whole sentence. And I thought it was dope so I decided to do a verse like that. Just going throgh steps in my life, yaknow. I thougt about doing a whole song but I just slimmed it down to one 16 bar verse cuz a whole song prolly be overkill. I guess I'll use it for a last verse for something.

short and sweet homie,ill sh!t.Its a diff style spit and u pulled it off pretty well.Keep postin Stay ^
-Avi

Thanks, Av ^^^

excellent spit d-dizzle,that would sound niceon the end of a song to finish it up perfectly,i really liked it,peep my shit on open mic sometime. big propz

bismillah

Aiight den, I'll do that. Thanks on the reply

^^^ Damn, ya'll be sleepin'

an original style in the way u spittin on this, i guess it was weird at the start but it like compressed a whole bunch of emotions, thoughts into a line which was nice.. keep spittin
peace out...

Thanks, pimpin' , the rest scream at cha boi