![]() |
T RAZ v/s AMEND
20 Line Max
5 Votes(No Poll Wins) Check In Verse Due In 1 Hour |
aight...i'm ready
|
Moved.. to front lines... T-raz dont qualify for ellite
|
i gotta question for ya, how long you been known as a trick?/
the only amends you gon be makin, is a truce with my dick/ yo ass aint nothin but a bootleggin midgett/ cake ass playin hopscotch and jimmeny crickett/ get a bat, swing for ya skull and then i hit it/ didn't you know it was your mom that asked me to stick it?/ delahoya thought twice about, steppin to me/ only thing you'll do after this is regret fuckin wit me/ time to lay yo ass down, call it lyrical dismissal/ here comes a bomb for yo ass, droppin ya like a missle my games up elevated, and you stuck at a medium/ you couldn't rise above me if you were high off o helium/ my words send shock to ya brain, ya ass is feelin delerious/ spittin wack ass shit at me, i'm askin are you fuckin serious/ my words are unreachable, escalated and graduated/ you sittin there face purple, like a fat man constapated |
??....how was that
|
A or T?, Im Before This Geek ~ And Ya Flows More Dry Then Imported Wheat
Floor This Freak, So Fuckin Wak ~ He Could Give His All And Get Nothing Back Run Ya Trap, And Swallow Teeth ~ U Wanna Win? Then Fuckin Borrow Me Discard The Weak, T's The Wakkest ~ Like Carbon And Flint, Meet Ya Match Kid Bleedy Badly, From Ya Head n Face ~ Come With Tracks And I'll Dead Ya Race Read Ya Waste, Oh...I Meant Verse ~ Now Which Weak Line Will I Hit First . . . . Blah, that should do it |
ten minutes left...you aint posted
|
not bad...uppin for votes
|
hey some criticism or votin would be nice
|
anyone???
|
help us out man...uppin for votes
|
vote=AMEND
Better punches but it was close....keep elevatin' COME POLL VOTE ON THEZE TWO BATTLEZ PLEAZE: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=38073 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=38072 |
better punches?? aight.....uppin for votes, let's see what everyone else has to say
|
You wanna talk about punches then it's like this, T-Raz you was throwing plenty of jabs, and most of them didn't connect. Amend was throwing right hooks and ended with a uppercut and hit you with all off em. That sums it up
Vote= Amen Ya'll come vote on my battle with freestylerhyme D-dizzle vs. Freestylerhyme |
aaaahhh...damn...lol....aight.....keep em comin
sayin i'm a swing and a miss?, and i couldn't connect?/ why the fuck am i gettin criticized by these cake made rejects?/ |
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:06 AM. |