can u rap 2 it
 

2nd beat i made but the 1st imma put up

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/dblokmusic.htm

need some honest criticisms and shit

can ne1 put sumthin up 2 it

DJX you seem to be a big producer here, what you think bout it for a fruity loop

peace

personally, i like it

....but i dont know much bout this so it hard to giv specific advice on how to make it betta..

all i can say is keep it up, soundn great

Argh...

why is the entire song reverbed?

do something with that...

add to this...its got like 2 instruments....

bassline is distortin with the kick....or the kick is just too much...

The strings that come in are too low....

its ok...not horrible...but theres alot u can do with it..

.pz.,

i expected worse than that

i'll work on it