illwritten -=\/S=- scortch23
 

lets go
u know the rules
10-20 lines...
3-0KO
5 win
i spitn 1st

iight spit playa

was up dog this goin on tonight or what

yea..

i know i havnt much said th'inflictin punches before//
butnow il hitya over the head with my linguistic 2 by 4//
why u lookin so stresd? were u expectin sum remorse?//

my unrehearsed verses are like verbal burglary//
i got the natural skill flowin thru my erteries//
ur mom is hotta than the planet mercury//
thats why i fucked er pussy so hard that she now needs surgery//

u sit at home writin freestyls all day long//
the best u come up with is "tic toc tic toc"//
ur raps are so boring it makes me yawn//
like listnin to a quiet long classical song//
with bad rhymes and a flow that seems totally wrong//

Your so fuckin fat; ya weigh a thousand pounds//
wheneva ya walk ya shake the fuckin ground//
Dont swim in the lake...you'll sink and drown//
Ya step on the scale, it sez "u a whale er a cow?"//

ur the size of an elephant but have half the brain//
now its quite evident uv lost this game//
cuz ur rhymes aint relevant, they just fuckin lame//
ur shitines is so prevalent, u should be ashamed//

aight lets hear urs.....

oh shit dog ur hurtin me now, after it took about a halfanhour,
what is u goin thru source books, lookin for power,
i m listenen to yo shit, that im gonna devour,
u a soft cat, lighter then flour,
i ll roll u three ways, turn ur moms to a horror,
damn kid u call me an elaphant,
whatta u in preschool, neva mind its irrelavant,
u rymes comin outta dr suess to the 7th kid,
u been hustled kid, whoever said u was hot,
notta break ur heart u not, matterafact u like a bloodclot,
stuck tied up in a knot, u fuckin wit a juggernot,
heres my plot , ima come to your spot take ur mother and sister,
rape em on your cockroached infested cot,
what is this 8th grade ribbs ur so fat jokes,
damn kid ill smoke u faster then i can take tokes,
of yo mmomas boats, me against u,
its like murda she wrote, u like em 8 mile ima make u choke,
now cmon people uppin the votes ,
this kid looked all over takin notes,
so here goes tic toc tic toc this kid blows

uppin the votes 187 up in here

scortch you tore him up man

vote=scortch

vote on mine dawg

damn u ripped him worse then me i felt bad not no more
vote=scortch
maybe we can go another round sometime let me know

ye scortch took it pretty easy
u were too soft ill u had the better vocab u just gotta go for his throat next time dogg

o dogs sheck out my shit TMcVeigh Vs. KiD_fRozT....
i'm TMcVeigh.......

scortch had better flow, vote =scortch

thanx playas

scorchl=vote

scorch had a nice flow and just torn that nigga tha pieces

even though tha other nigga couldve of won, he just needs to elevate, alot.
u got some nice punches---i mean one nice punch