free style 187 crew dis
 

freestyle 187 dis here tell me wat ya'll thoght

For a freestyle it was coo...kinda monotinis.....voice iz coo though..stay upppppp

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ive had my encounter with the 187 crew and except for one of them they are a bunch of pansy ass faggots........ so i decided to pick up the best kept secret, otic.. this shits off da hook

[COLOR=blood red]So now we taken over this rap game so Stop Dick Eatin[/COLOR]

U NEED TO PUT MORE ENERGY in ya FREESTYLE MAN, u got a flow but U DONT LET ANYTHING STAND OUT....u take ruff beats n calm em down u gotta TEAR EM UP ya know....

bump the beat more rip the mic louder n s'all good

no dis.. jus figg'ad u wanted advice...I'd make ya presence 10 tiems more imressionable


HOLLA

good lookin david

yo otic, im makin an audio song bout philly, got any things i could throw in there?

ya they GOT BOMB ASS CHEESESSTEAKS N THEY SELL EM EVEN IN ALASKA

flow is kinda borin.. and pretty much the rest of the performance.. delivery and emotion could use some more.. and dog breath from your stomach cause all i hear is ya ass breathin in every so many seconds.. between like every line... lyrics aint that.....

4/10