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I climbed the moutain than came back down//
I took out my enemy's then tourned around//
I know what its like to be on top of the game//
It's unbeilvably contagious and isnane//
I say it how it is and take no one's game//
Angels dont need fortune to gain fame//
slowly I'll come back and beware when I do//
I'll cut off all life support and take you out to//...........


THE STORM ARISES AND SUNSET FALLS TO THE NIGHT SKY


Dainty little fingers caress what was once yours in time//
collaborated circles finish off your final rhyme//
you hit the ground your trophy is gone//
no longer a hero singing the winner's song//
So you leave for a while//
no more wearing a smile//
you blend in with the crowd to act as if you were weak and calm//
waiting for your last moment to release the last dawn//
so the angel is back to tell her story before she rips in//
then never before seen fortage appears at the end//

ANOTHER DAYLIGHT APPROACHES BEFORE SHE RELEASES HER WRATH


I've seen moral corruption and blanket skies disapear//
I know when when you are close because my enemy's are near//
I bring you nothing but pitty on your souls//
your ego's have arisen and now mine will let go//
This is your territory so welcome to mine//
you have three days to respond before the end of your time// :mad: :mad:

girl, if you had an album, i would buy 2! so far everything you drop is SIC! although the beginning is definantly "landslide" by stevie nicks(also the smashing pumpkins, nine inch nails and the dixie chicks.) nice spit, keep it coming, nice to read something fresh up in here. check out mines in poetic scriptures and also here in open mic. word.

ill post girl.U proven yaself well fo realz,hope to see more from u in da future.Im uppin dis for ya.Stay ^
-Avi

Thank you for the reply's... and its not the begining from Landslide by dixie chicks lol.... " I climbed the mountain and I turned around" lol mines is a lil different.. OoNnEe

ahha ill spit angelic,nice flow consant like what...peep my shit in open mic osmetime,propz...
bismillah

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Good spit Angelic, I'm also a fan of yours...Keep em on their toes...lol...peace

Hot

DAyum MiHa', that shyt was nice I liked it, the way you used ur werds was very interesting to read!! keep doin ya thizzo
holler

^^

not bad.. really poetic joint here... if had a smooth flow an' didn't really lead my attention else where.. nice spit uppin' 4 ya...

.Holla.
 

Ma, this joint was pretty hot... you know how to put the words together. Sounds like you know what you doin' girl. I'm uppin' this joint, and every other one of yours i've read. You got skill, keep postin' them rhymes.

Shit hot definatly feelin' ya flow.
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