I truly hope so
 

How can you?
Tell me it's real
the emotions you feel
& then do me this way?

Why would you?
Say that you care
that you'll always be there
& then pull this on me?

How could you?
Just do me like that
& then never look back
Am I worthless?

Can you tell me
what you see
In this shattered human being
I'm helpless!

Is it easy?
Are you watching how
Careless words fly out
Do you care?

Because some where it's gotta hurt you like it's killing me
I just hope so
to prove you have a soul and those words held weight that you told me
I truly hope so...

This was raw emotion, sorry it was bad but I wanted to post it

baby i truly understand this poem it that it was true emotion as always this was great keep flowing

Aye, seemed true and straight from the heart...raw if you would...simple, yet effective in depicting a certain amount of emotions...

no critique...

...bananos (formerly resp...)...

Indeed. This was straight up and out and pouring from the heart.

How could you?
Just do me like that
& then never look back
Am I worthless?

Can you tell me
what you see
In this shattered human being
I'm helpless!

^Hardest hitting lines.^

~Shalom~