RapVerse.com Community - the keystyle by atetrack,peep all yall

ermmm ok yall,this is a real quick keystyle whatevr you call it,it aint checked ove ror nothing,thought id just post it,so dont get picky coz ive mispelt shit or something,like i said its quick...open to all your critique also!i dunno the subject,just something i wrote out , enjoy,oh and if you havent already gimme a comment on my other open mic peice,im looking for comments,i got 100 something veiws and like 30 comments,dont make no sense...blah.

bismillah

ive been trialed and styled to public for treason//
acts of heresy on the subjects of no apparent reason//
contemplated how many of the four seasons ill be released on//
im speechless,i demand freedom,dammit its peasant hunting season//
in two days time yall consider that species non existent//
ready to fight for they rights but willin to uphold little resistant//
knowing that its futile,they stop they commitment their arguement non persistant//
lobbing neanderthol projectiles,deflected effortlessly off riot sheild equipment//
sobbing chemical viles bacteria pregnant,resented merciless for yeilding malignant//
pigments shades of red and blue,violet ochre and green//
reflecting on every angle like in a angelic dream,seemelessly intergrading into the scene//
even though its robot and projected onto a white screen,it cant tell the difference//
science screaming we even got nature beat,revelations tears of joy an screams//

ermmm....yeah...ok i forgot my line...right erm fuck it ill change it...ok.

(uh) incoming,troopers flag down a another mother ship and open fire before inspectin it//
rejectin git for sardine fodder unimpressed by it,detonate it...uh...cast and crew present//
the picture went black,and everyone relaxed,inhaled asmatic breathes no benifits//
an hour of happiness were noone in the little tight knit television soap opera esqu family had to think, no regrets...except//
moments form now they wont remeber the begining and in doing so cautiously rejoing the line//
reusin gtheir tickets,stealing and by their own free will subject themselves to brainwashing//
erm,yeah its a vicious cycle yall.alot of shit now days is evil.i only use computers to spell check//
coz my academecs(Academics)are something of beauty,even one of little intellect would respect//
congregate form massive rally round the novel burner,spit on the epitaph,or light a match//
either way is taken as an insult to some,and the signs of a structural community collapse//
relapse back to the dawn of the attacks and remap the acurate lack of defensive positioning//
pause at the moment of gunfire christening,zoom in on the crazy man in the crossfire whistling//
( hell no!)vice prez subjected the detect and misdirected his intents,(cross reference failure)//
illhuminati.....
ill change the order in wich things are done,ill make the lungs swap to the sun,questions the question marks//
and theyll question themselves,and ill horde all the answers for myself,ill be a think tank,horde it all to myself//
introspective,as we delve into the prisms reflective intentive directives and compromisse the outstanding objective//
targetin demory selected,left in desert dessert for vultures,oh hold on your death kicks are art,let me sculpture//
the big bad wolf is here to hear your fear,best get holstered.
one`

womans voice,robotic loudspeaker ((free verse failure critcal fault,meltdown imminent,destruction intent increase,repent...repeat...repent,repent for your god forsaken souls(bang,static) )

And thats how you shut the fuck up bitch,god damn.
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like i said mad quick hit me up something...haha make sense outta that,i know what im talking about