J-Deisel vs Xquizit(criminal intent)
 

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i got them star wars rap and i keep em in full throttle//
so im here to pop ya top like champagne bottles//
im a rap fiend on the sene so be prepared//
dog the ony "diesel" on you is the "jeans" u wear//
the only way that u seein bars is if u was a killer//
i got more punchlines against this cat then chicken on sunday dinner//
fuk with me dawg i'll let ya bitch hurt u//
ya chance at beatin me is the "hares" chances at beatin the "slick turtle"//
i go 2 hands but ima carry three nines//
this nigga couldnt' "cum raw" if he was "circumsised" three times//
yoi ant gotta lie no more aint gotta write rhymes no more//
this "childs" "destiny" to be a rapper aint gonna be a "survivor" no more//

post up diesel

Yo my rhymes shine so bright they can make Criminal Intent
eyes blind..//1
and at the same time Diesel spit 1 verse n rip u wit 1 line..//2 Criminal Intent hell nah nigga, U should be known as Criminal Faggite, This kid so soft i'm whoopin ya aSs usin ya own fists..//3
Now u gettin mad cuz i'm dissin' n pissin'..// 4
Comon' dawg tha only reason u spittin' is cuz u got a lisp..// 5
Keep talking shit nigga i'll Ripp out ya tounge so u cant talk no more..// 6
yeh i kno u wanna cry cuz they'll be no more dick in ya mouth lil wHore..// 7
I'm ill, speakin of evil mah sequell is ill-legal ill rip out ya hair and call you the blad-eagle..// 8
maybe this will knock ya sensless ass back to reality., with this brutal fatality..//9
u'll be jeopardize ur mom life and fucking, kidnap ya wife and kidz, then put my knife ta wigz, so i'm really splittin hairz,// 10
And U ask me did i really give a fuck when i split ur wigz, now u really gettin scared//11
hold up Criminal Intent don't call ur mom yet cuz my last line will Hit u in ya chest and ya breathing gets-impaired, and ya gasping choking, cuz tha gats-im-toatin leave ya ass-jus-smokin// 12

3=tko
5=win

uh huhREMEBER VOTE IN THE POLLS AND POST YA OPINION DOWN HERE AND IF U CANT VOTE IN THE POLLS THEN VOTE DON HERE

uppin

uppin for ppl to vote. I won't vote cuz j is in my crew but.......vote ppl.

Criminal held it down, I wasn't feelin diesels shit that much becuz of its lack of more crazier punchlines. Criminal gotz my vote.

thanx for the luv dawg er body make sure that u vote in the poll

u know somethin most polls by Saturday cuz sun is 2 long

oK. I'M GOIng to vote just to show you why J-Diesel won.

Criminal Intent:

the only way that u seein bars is if u was a killer//
i got more punchlines against this cat then chicken on sunday dinner//

All i can say is you need harder punches than this ^^^^^^ to win batttles. (No disrespect).

This:

im a rap fiend on the sene so be prepared//
dog the ony "diesel" on you is the "jeans" u wear//

was alright. But you can't talk about your self in a battle. I.E> the first line.

J-Diesel:

I'm ill, speakin of evil mah sequell is ill-legal ill rip out ya hair and call you the blad-eagle..// 8
maybe this will knock ya sensless ass back to reality., with this brutal fatality..//9
u'll be jeopardize ur mom life and fucking, kidnap ya wife and kidz, then put my knife ta wigz, so i'm really splittin hairz,// 10
And U ask me did i really give a fuck when i split ur wigz, now u really gettin scared//11
hold up Criminal Intent don't call ur mom yet cuz my last line will Hit u in ya chest and ya breathing gets-impaired, and ya gasping choking, cuz tha gats-im-toatin leave ya ass-jus-smokin// 12

Mass amount of multi's ran through this verse and this part flowed well. The puches weren't all that hard but still better then Criminals.

Vote: J-Diesel

my thoughts exactly!
my vote=j poll vote!

damn i thought it was
2-1 i'm up
but in the poll it say 2-2 what's the deal don't tell me that kid skiddlez vote for u twice.

im sure somebody voted in the polls but didnt post their opinion dow here. And unless skiddlez doesnt like u i dontsee a reason why he would do that cuz i dont even know him. Tommorow 12:00a.m. is when the votes end

(VOTE DOWN HERE AND IN THE POLL!!!!!!!!)

Uppin' 4 vote people

Yo this shit is crazy nobody's voting n-e-way Criminal wait for a couple more of votes cuz its says 2-2 in the poll