LogiKal vs Suicide moose round 2
 

rules are 10-15 lines
no rclcying anythign goes in lyircs





U SPIT FIRST!!

fine i'll spit first

good luck man

make sure u don't copy paste cuz i knew when people do that

ok

look look look, this guy just check coming back/
all he doing just adding wins to my fucking stack.
I guess this guy doesn't get the point/
I so high from smoking this whole joint.
i neva have to try on this guy/
this has nohting better but to lie.
i don't know y he doens't give up/
he probaly fed up fucking fucking his special cup.
this guy probaly looks like a hill billy/
this guys a joke, hes fucking silly.
this guys drinking, hes fucking drunk/
all this guy is a fucking punk.
he probaly gona fucking copy paste/
even with that i still leave him in the fucking waste.
now its ur turn to do ur spit/
by the way don't make it look like shit.

yo i'm a new playa to this game
i got no pain
no shame
but u
u try and sometimes people just wished u died
i'm back to rise from my demise in from the last ryhme that i spit
i know that was shit but now i'm back to show ur ass whos on crack
u talk bout smokin a blunt
so while u do that i'll be eatin ur mamas
ur a nerd u sholdn't be heard
but w/e its a free country people need to be able to say wat they gots on their mind
but sometimes it just aint right
u gots to mowed down in this showdown
so i'm takin u down to make u frown and look like a clown

yo afta mamas supposed to be CUNT

ok that was ok i uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both Are Pretty Weak ... Log has rhymes but not much depth or flow
n Moose u had some nice rhymes but faded at the end what happened man? U still get my vote tho

suicidal moose, this is a lot better than your last one, which was about a line and a half long. Try to keep your rhymes flowing, and work on some punchlines. You've improved a lot though.

logikal, you're an okay MC but you keep repeating yourself. Every battle I see you say the same crap about you not having to try, and how they'll never win. You have to score a punch in there somewhere, because without that its just rhyming trash talk. Whats the point of a bark if you have no bite?

vote=moose
good improvement

yo at the end cause i'm new to the this shit i pressed the submit reply but now i'm just finish it off for real

yo in thie ryhme u just bein shown
mother fucker just go home

ok if u say he had rhymes but i wasn't feeling it but w/e thast just my opinion

I aint tryin to trash ya but ive heard you betta man... show me somethin new n ill show u a vote for Logik