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rekluse 04-11-03 04:34 PM

pppeeeeeeeppppppp itttttttttttttttttttt
 
yo i kill~with the powers~ manifested~from christ
and i will~ diss the cowards~ non-mejestic~with rhymes

expose your life's errors threw raps that i spit
like 1 you were born and 2 you tryed to challenge this

thats a fatal~ misstake~ your gardan angel misslead yo ass
not capable~ to take~my infinte knowlege i unravel 2 smash

smash-you~ flatter the a tattoo~ dont have-to blast-you
bash-you~as if the moon had mashed you~like a cashew

who~ wanna~ go~ all out with the verbal-tacticks?
you~gunna~ go~running like a scared hurd of gerbil-draft-picks


the sick-shyt is here~ from the top of the crainum
i flip-shyt into gear~ when fakes think they titanium
i spit-shyt so clear~like the sunset in the Mediterranean~
im a half human half tazmainian~your a pomeranian~from the deserts like an iranian~ while im underground like subterranean~panamanians

look it up if its too advanced-4-you
cuz my style humiliates like a nigga de-panstin-you

i eat~ threw~ isthmus~ and raw matter~ like acid
i beat~ foos~ 4 christams~ and shatter~ they bones like glass-did *******(from unbreakable)

complexity~fo-ever~will formulate~my whole rap-scheme
perplexity~nope-never~will reformulate~the chemical snap-king

suckas~bite~like frost in the winter when you dont need-it
fuckas~resite~the rhyme i say all year like the plege of allegence

got~ more~ shyt~4 the produtions~to check
shot~hor's~and pricks~ with the eruption~ of my tech

come ~one~come all~ nigga.... is you ready 4 the verbal stomp?
dumb ~wons~all fall~ .....when they step up with fake comp.

AngelicSheShe 04-12-03 01:25 AM

you have a nice skill... bring it out more though.. expand a little.. its hard to explain but a year down the road you'll know what I'm talking about.. You can be great lol.. OoNnEe

MDB 04-12-03 01:42 AM

i like this one but kind of hard to follow the flow

peace

rekluse 04-12-03 10:47 AM

thanx 4 tha uppin

i might need to just place ,'s
not place ~ cuz i see what your sayin

infact im just not gunna put anything in between the word'

thanx again

uppin

rekluse 04-17-03 11:50 AM

n e way uppin


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