metaphysical one vs Cameronj86
 

alright here's the rules

30 line max
due by the end of the day(sooner if possible)
no d/r votes
no hate votes


Alright u spit first

yo, I'll vote on this once it drops....

vote on me vs skiddlezz in the meantime

i'm too complex, CAM, so you about to get 86'ed//
like playin' soccer with a diaper, you kick nothin' but baby shit//
i've got no problem spittin' first, don't even need to plan my attack//
i'm confident i'll win due to your obviously weak handle on rap//
are you schizophrenic?, you gotta be mentally ill//
two-thirds my age and only bringing one-tenth of my skill//
so plan out your verse and choose your words wisely//
cause if they're not clever enough, when you spit 'em they won't find me//
your ryhmes are like BIG in his casket, they're dead weight//
so how you gonna come hard when you can't even ejaculate when you masturbate//
shit, i'm filled with blood lust and the motivation to release it//
like a beast unleashed, removing your eyes so you can't even perceive it//
comin' with explicit linguistics which qualify as illicit EXPRESSION//
like a weapon DRAWN while in a multiple felon's possession//
and you're my primary target so you're destined to fall//
actin' like you GOD, but SON you ain't NASty at all//
similar to Iraq, cause ain't none of your lines bomb proof//
my ryhmes are like fine suits woven from the finest material this side of Milan, duke//
my principles are principal to the way I spit so lyrical//
already 5 MCs in a casket, and you're gonna need a miracle//
so in this rap race i'm heavily chased//
cause every verse is effectively laced, yet i'm deceptively placed//
in a weight class that doesn't fit my description//
spittin' compositions similar to forbidden religions//
cause it's my mission to come unorthodox unlike Hasidics//
in a cipher of lyricists you're not permitted - you don't fit in//
i know you're amazed on how i took one look and had the dictionary memorized//
can't believe what you just read, rubbin' your eyes, you're mesmorized//
but you can't just listen to COMPANY Flow 3 or 4 times//
bite all their lines and INCORPORATE 'em into your lines//

30 lines . . . spit it

damn.. nice meta

you keep elevatin son

lets see what this cat can counter with

Nice one, looks like i gotta up use some good stuff in this battle (finally)

I'm here with more skillz, reppin 4 the YOUTH
with longer lasting flavor like the new Juicy Fruit
Here's the SKINNY, I'm the future u the past
Now u niggas disappear like ANOREXIC chicks on slim fast
Don't come in here trying 2 rap if u older than Eric Clapton
U couldn't abuse this "boy" if ur name was MICHAEL JACKSON
I'm a SMOOTH CRIMINAL, u mite be metaphysical, but i'm the real spirtual individual
ur flows so predictable, no-one's "feeling u" like a ghost getting a physical
so when I spit messages subliminal, turing u optimisic rappers cynical,
already looking at the glass half m't instead of half full, but even at half glance u don't stand half a chance
like one-legged paraplegics trying 2 breakdance
already half the audience is in a catatonic trance
Kicking ur ass w/o getting in2 fighting stance

Trying 2 spit facts?Face it, ur a wack, trash, wanna-b black
Game's somehing u thought u had but u really didn't, like a "hypochondriac"
I'll put ur name in the paper, the obituraries
cuz no-one sees ur game like "Blind Pictionary"
and ur rhymes don't make sense u need 2 check ur "dictionary"
My rhymes leave u drowzy like Od'ing on anaesthia
so u won't feel the pain when I "charge" at u like a Visa
Slash u 2 Jesus, the Emee Cee Grim Reaper
fighting losers who hump monkies and say they got "Jungle Fever"
U lyrically retarded, i'm a lyrical genius
U getting at me through Nas?I don't believe this!
Don't hate on my role model if urs is Butthead and Beavis
U say i can't ejaculate? but u can't "cum hard"
I thought I saw ur game but its not really there like a mirage
I spit words like missiles: Deadly, Automatic, and Ballistic
How u call Meta a challenge? More like a statistic

yo, both verses were ill ya'll

gonna have to go with meta...

shit flowed just a bit better in my head, everything else was pretty even

alright, let's get the votes started (u vote here and we vote on urs)

my vote is goin to cameronj86....he was throwin sum sick punches and his word plays were fresh...Don't come in here trying 2 rap if u older than Eric Clapton
U couldn't abuse this "boy" if ur name was MICHAEL JACKSON
....this was a decent battle....metaphysical had hot flow but not enough punches

vote-cameron

good battle here
vote to meta though just stole it on slightly better punches and some originality but keep this shit up

i aint votin cuz i donno who won haha but i just wanna say that was tight shit from both of yas, especially cam, compared to everything else ive seen of urs uve elevated big time

I thought that meta had it, but then i read the line "Here's the SKINNY, I'm the future u the past
Now u niggas disappear like ANOREXIC chicks on slim fast" i was like DAMN. It was a close battle but i will have to say that cam took it.
Can you guys vote on my battle with Gizmo on the poll please.
Vote= Cam

uppin'

uppin' (we vote on yours)