introducin myself
neva let yall rappiz get tha best of me//
cuz when u see a mic, man, thats mah effigy// cuz some say im a lyrical prodigy// others say im just tha hot commodity// always wantin to buy mah shit// always wantin ta kno why i spit// they never refuse to amuse and abuse tha race i cud not choose// but if u wanna step up, then u'll sink or u'll float// but for the perished in the past, man "murda she wrote"// they cryin on their way back to their crib// afta tha curb is wet wit tears when i lyrically cracked em a rib// so ladys and gentleman, sit back, relax and enjoy the rhymes// cuz im baskin in tha sun man, its my time ta shine// \/\/0R|) gimme some feedback, cuz i kno i got a long way ta go |
yea that was alrite, but u gotta elivate a lot, well u said it urself u got a long way to go so u must be just startin
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yep just startin, and wut do u mean by elavate?
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Nice avy yo, lol. I see that u have skills, u just need to elevate ya lyricism a lil more. expand ya vocab and ya rhyme scheme as well. this was a decent drop but theres room for elevation. keep spittin and elevatin. 1
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gracias, and im workin on tha vocab, and anyone else dont be afraid to give it to me straight and tell me im tha worst MC on tha planet, i can handle it ;)
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