this damn planet
 

people of this planet disgust me somthing in society needs adjusting the machine is rusting and coming to a hault humans are at fault for the asult thats brought apon us if were not carfull god wont want us perfecting the empty words in a promise eevertime that we talk going no where ever time that we walk unless we stalk some stupid style or product that damn nike swoosh got brains all cought up in superficial materialistic bull shit and youdont have to wear it just because the kicks fit but i must admit osiris assist in the landing of kickflipsbut its all a scam and a lie they get rich when we buy its a bitch to get by tn a world where we play on a stage bult on stress and minimum wage the latest craze might lock the cage ohhh no hope for the humman race so wave and watch us fade away just watch us fade away just watch us fade awawy

shit was a nice lil spit usual...i like your style an flow,but yo..enter key and maybe a slash at the end of yur lines,or wherever you see fit to place them,make it a bit easier to read and follow.apart from that i enjoyed it,i like spits like this always...makes you think,nice poll questions too...foreal....yo peep my shit sometime,dont be scared of the length...tis all good....maybe recheck your verse also for spelling and shit to make it easier to read and follow for cats eh....
bismillah keep elevatin....propz