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The MRB 04-16-03 10:32 AM

Temper verse from unfinished business cut
 
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Temper Verse

Temper flares like a lighted splint when mixed with certain elements reacts/
N because I live in Hydrogen, I pop, skip lunch and feast on snacks/
Damm I gotta live up to facts, Coz in my conscious there are cracks/
That make me think its ok to make a dudes nose look like post use tampax/
You see sometimes anger can’t be controlled, it needs locking in a safe/
But wants the combinations been found, my enemies need to develop faith/
Lock N Key don’t work neither, theres no safety procedure/
Coz if the line is crossed this event could be your life’s omega/
Don’t Laugh at the skinny figure, coz the fire can only spread/
Words N rhymes, proved to penetrate minds, yet physical offence lead/
The Onslaught, no matter what ya thought, presumptions can’t save u now/
Although after a certain time period, my senses do allow/
A breathing space, then ull see on my face, a slight hint of remorse/
I step back a bit, from my raging fit, and this seems to force/
A calming down, But your bound, to live in knowledge knowing/
Ull never blow me out fully, ill always be fuckin glowing/

Lokinator 04-16-03 11:08 AM

Nice Drop Dunny, Tight Vocab. I Wouldn't Mind Listenin ta this On Audio... Keep it Up Boyo

The MRB 04-16-03 01:56 PM

thankz methane lad i preciate u giving a dude some feedback

The MRB 04-17-03 08:59 AM

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AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 03:16 PM

yup another anger peice.. I can't pass judgement on an anger peice because that's excatly what it is an anger peice. yup.. OoNnEe

The MRB 04-17-03 04:15 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by AngelicSheShe
yup another anger peice.. I can't pass judgement on an anger peice because that's excatly what it is an anger peice. yup.. OoNnEe


thankz 4 da feedback, but Hip Hop music is a means 2 express your views and opinions and most of those r fuckin angry 1z

The MRB 04-18-03 04:10 AM

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