quick keystyle (hot though)
 

YO niggas can get it when I step in the building/
That goes for all men,women, and children/
I am the first one like the pilgrims/
u like how i use complex meteors and idioms/
they want to know where i be/
i just say i be on that Neptune street/
heads bumping like Neptune beat/
i do what i got to do to eat/
that from roaming the street/ to cooking that heat/
In my hood u hear i a lot of nigga who nasty and nice/
If Jesus can turn water to wine/
than u can turn that ho into house wife
Yeah right like that ever gone happen/
u got a better chance at seeing a nigga with no legs tap dancing/ Nigga said i am racist / I said i cant be that i sell to much white for that/
I am not u i don't fuck wit dirty ho's/
If i wanted that i could had put on some dirty clothes/
I not a top selling rapper so dont have ice/
yeah we make money but we wear the same thing twice/
and that's real

Yo good looks for reading my shit and i gone to better with time

ok well I didnt like it... sorry.. but uh... you have alot of work to do.. vocab finding a flow to your words so they blend to gether.. maybe even a good theme.... OoNnEe