UnEmceeAble vs. BlUnT-Mc
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Verse are do within one hour after you check in: 16 lines no c/v or d/r 3-0 is a K.O> First to 5 (if we get slept on...its the most votes when the poll closes) Consider this my check in.... |
UnEmceeAble you better rip this fool. Split representin HOLLA
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Let tell you right now that I’m destin to win…and I’m gonna start from the endin so I don’t have to pretend-to-begin/
It’s Round two and I’m still leaving this MC crippled and scarred…you writing verses on boners but they still aint hard/ Blunt- you just might- drop a good verse on a good occasion… but every time you drop you come like used playstations/ Your about as fluent as claymation… you anxiously waiting a winning record but you need to *stay patient*/ You stuck on a losing-trip, you need a vacation…your verses will fit in better with the Dot-Com family at Gay-Nation/ Kid- I’m about to put your words and your sole in touch…cuz with your foot in your mouth your ass won’t be talking much/ I murder emcee’s when I battle- watch me cop-a-kill…and make that W vanish in front of your face like I was Copperfield/ The only reason you think you hot is because u got no fans…u sold out no-shows, your entertaining empty stands/ Your supplying with-out demand…let me pull your pants down to prove to every one that you’ve been dis-manned/ We aint even started to battle yet and you already on the retreat…if my eyes serve me correct, you surfin round RB with the most defeats/ You couldn’t even be shit with your head in the toilet seat…you rapping with candy in ya mouth and trying to say your rhymes are sweet/ Fuck this, smoking this cat is a waste-of-time…even my watch stops when you start to rhyme/ You need to set up an alias as compost-fine…cuz every time you com-post you post up recycled lines/ It’s like I tied you to the L, they way your bound-to-Lose…you’ll be sleeping in the ocean cuz I provide water front-views/ You got smoked::::: Blunts are for smokers not for those who over and over re-act/ You didn’t have a chance the first time so why the hell did u rematch!/ |
check in... sorry it wasn't last night.. I was at work when I accepted an' it was time to bounce home...
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yo.. I might be longer than an hour.. I gotta go out on a delivery for work.. be back soon...
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I'm back, here's my verse:
dawg this isn't a re-match, it's your death re-lapse.// see man you can't crack a blunt rap(wrap) without a rasor blade.// an' yo-rap's so dull it's like safety scissors made by paper-mate.// you got no game, wait.. you do, the game just don't want you.// too lame for the industry, so like a sick horse I'm puttin' you outta your misery.//(lame is what you call a sick horse) try'n to battle this MC is like adding insult to injury.// cause after I cut you up in this round I'm comin' to gun you down in your city.// forcefully I claim victory over this so called emcee.// self-proclaimed dick-ryda, shit script writah, Un-emcee-able, even he know's he's un-able.// in-capible of creatin graceful lyrics that don't 'cause ear-aches.// your so-called hip-hop spirit must-a packed up an' left.// 'cause damn son, if that passes as rap tu-pac would be glad he's dead.// you like biggie smalls, not notorious.. just a big talker with a small cock.// oops, did I let ya secret out.. sorry bout that dawg.// but hey, atleast I didn't tell RB about that shit you did with ya mom.// with a flip of ya toung, and some stank old ass pussy cum.// yum-yum, chew that shit up like a cow chewin' it's cud....// ^ I want to keep goin' on this, but it's 17 lines already.... |
em took this this easy with wayyyy better punches. and he had metas and a lil wordplay.
The only reason you think you hot is because u got no fans Kid- I’m about to put your words and your sole in touch…cuz with your foot in your mouth your ass won’t be talking much/ NICE^ overall nice verse unemceeable, just work on wording some of ur punches better so they will hit harder. BLunt-MC. your verse was kind of childish. especially talkin bout moms and stuff, i was expectin this to be a closer battle. work on constructin metas and try to get off the mom and guns topics. good battle y'all. me vs. bribeone1:: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39493 |
I agree, man, you know how hard it is to get inspiration sitting at a fuckin' desk in a drab grey walled back room in an office.. damn, like can you say "writers block".. I'm disappointed in myself for this verse..
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yeh i know what u mean yo, just try to close ur eyes and envision a totally different surrounding. when i get writers block i just try to erase all my thoughts and just focus on stuff that has nothin to do with anything i was thinkin of earlier.
hey would u mind voting on my battle against lilbrick005. dont forget to put ur vote in the polls. thanks yo. :: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39462 |
uppin for votes
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Can we see some votes PLZ. ....I know some of you are out there::::::::::::
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ya mon ma vote goes to unemnceeable
hit up ma battle gainst lil rick |
umm yeah....sure......*Not*
That vote don't count......only registered voters w/ poll votes rihgt Blunt? Right Ok......Uppin |
k Uppin....
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UnEmceeable: Nice wordplay, punches.. Bars were a little long, which makes it hard to keep a consistent flow, but it didn't affect the over all performance.
"Let tell you right now that I’m destin to win…and I’m gonna start from the endin so I don’t have to pretend-to-begin/" REALLY GOOD OPENER "Kid- I’m about to put your words and your sole in touch…cuz with your foot in your mouth your ass won’t be talking much/ I murder emcee’s when I battle- watch me cop-a-kill…and make that W vanish in front of your face like I was Copperfield/" VERY NICE, WON IT FOR YOU.. BlUnT-MC: Wasn't bad, just seemed like you didn't have the time to compete with his.. "see man you can't crack a blunt rap(wrap) without a rasor blade.// an' yo-rap's so dull it's like safety scissors made by paper-mate.//" NICE "but hey, atleast I didn't tell RB about that shit you did with ya mom.// with a flip of ya toung, and some stank old ass pussy cum.// yum-yum, chew that shit up like a cow chewin' it's cud....//" HURT YOU, SEEMED LIKE YOU WERE GOING FOR A FEW TOO MANY PERSONALS.. IF YOU'RE GOING FOR A PERSONAL, MAKES SURE IT SOUNDS WITTY OR INTELLIGENT.. GOOD BATTLE, but my vote goes to UnEmCeEaBlE |
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