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I've been through to much shit in my life / friends dieing left and right / i'm the only white / in a school of black/ getting talked smack /cuz i'm not black /they smack me i'm going to wack um back / took from my mom and step dad / torn from the normal life/ i was only 12 / it rings to many bells / i remember the cops / the cuffs / the talks / the mocks / packin the boxes / i didn't even get that / the blood the pain / it will all remain the same / in this life of the insane
Tell me what ya think i am new to all of this i am a white girl rapper Yay! girls need to rap more . ok just tell what ya think only the truth

yea, defintely white, elevate in ur ryhme, if ur gunna stick around, ill werk with you, good topic, u just dunno how to compose right, nextraordinary@yahoo.com - email me, well see wassup, 5/10

Good place to start, you need work, but you know that. Your run was pretty good, if you could've gotten that to rhyme that would've been great. Yo hit me back some time (pm)

you came off pretty hard fo a female white rapper, but you rhymin is definetly begginer type shit, but thats fine for now, just work with people and you be aright. just work at that shit. itll come

peep my shit, id appreciate it

Ya'll thanks do you really think i come off to hard fo a female white rapper??????