journey to fame
 

hook.....
Im in youre vission reality is about to collide..
pharcyde denied but I continue with pride..
linguistic's glide worldwide hatred aside..
twisted solutions untied is what I provide..

friend's are really snake's in the grass mentally blast
the contrast of friendship..hatred physically surpassed
I stand fast..only to slip emotionally trip in the struggle
Pride stripped and smuggled..Life I continue the juggle
opinions murdered I steadfast in this war of point.of.view
Jealousies motivated proceeded when his "joint's above u"
pain like "joint's shoved threw" mentally suffering stress
No way to express emotional anger hatred will progress
Pride is suppressed..mind's not willing to fulfill success
only feeling skill distress in this game of favorite's yo
friend's stabbing U is below low life is a struggle bro

hook.....
Im in youre vission reality is about to collide..
pharcyde denied but I continue with pride..
linguistic's glide worldwide hatred aside..
twisted solutions untied is what I provide..

world crumblin im struggling husslin goin no where fast
judged by those I surpassed..verbally compared ta last
prepared ta blast poisonus dart's no need for a shield
lower the force field only to unleash intelligence revealed
verbal missle's concealed I strike when near and taunted
foe's left unwanted mentally suffering fear and daunted
my script's are flaunted behind wall's only to see no prop's
word's on a flight to the top trip with no stops........

hook.....
Im in youre vission reality is about to collide..
pharcyde denied but I continue with pride..
linguistic's glide worldwide hatred aside..
twisted solutions untied is what I provide..

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wow.. I dont know why anyone would sleep on this. Its long but thats it. Great vocab it had a nice flow. Niece Piece .. OoNnEe

thanks

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I liked this one, it seems I like 90% of the stuff in open mic. The vocab was amazing, but it seemed to mask what you were trying to say, like you were sticking words in there so that it would sound better. In audio it would tkae time to not trip over some of those words. The flow was nice, and the scheme confused me a little, so it was either really simple or really elaborate. All in all, this was sick.
Peace

dat waz hott. nice vocab but i agree wit understatemnt

shit was aiight dark,was tight mos tthe way through,i thought it maybe dropped off in a couple of parts,but its still ill...keep posting,wanna see more nahmean,...peep my shit someitme ...
bismillah

thanks yall for the feed back this was just some things i had to get off my chest about fake friends ill return the favor.......1

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