Hard Life
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These days is gettin colder all the wiehgt on my shoulder b like a boulder wieghin a thounsand pounds look at the sky rain fallin down as i wonder why i still live to see my life pass me by rain still fallin wish i would die tryin hard to stay awake makin bills in dis game i cry when guns bust n shatter the frame of my brithers no body knows the pain that grows as i get old at 16 this scene seems like a dream in the cold i wait for the day i wake up outta my shell so i can see the world and its wealth just let the sun shine one day i'll make up my mind i pray for time doin crime is not justified i may be explicit the way i spit n make hits but i;m like a rock stubborn as fuck wit my eyelids shut cuz its a hard life every day a struggle n strivin i stay survivin aven though my destinys thrivin young thugs risin lookin for a new horizon |
Ok well... it had a flow to it which was good but try to work on throwing vocabualry in it. OoNnEe
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thanks
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yo... that was tight... I like how you know what you be talkn' buddie is right... work on your vocab babe...
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this was a nice drop. good topic, flow was good. keep spittin
also could you peep my shit?http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39624 |
good one :)
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more oppinions yo
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