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Bmack 04-17-03 07:00 PM

The Light...
 
The light shines from above to within your heart/
The dark takes over your soul and tears it apart/
You sit back and wonder what makes you tick/
Is it your veins ventricles or your dick/
And why dont we respect the ladies?
We go out to impress them with 60 thou mercedes/
Perry Ellis is to Rocawear as BIG was to Pac/
And Kurt Cobain was to cocaine as 50 to his glock/
I write a rhyme sit back to the future/
Hate goin out at night wonderin who's gon shoot ya/
This world is full of drama and lies/
If theres any left from the class of 2000 please rise/
Our future's being killed off once every 7 minutes/
And our population is rising with bad intentions within it/
Why do the good die young?/
Why should a father cry or bury his son?/
When will the races come together as one?/
And realize all this racist bullshit is done?/
You dont see Ulysses S Grant or Robert E Lee/
Or Abraham Lincoln bein a jackass on TV/
So why are we still livin in the past in agony/
And When will see the light?/
When will our mouths jus shut and try to solve the fight/
Jus look into the future and see yourself in your children/
Try and prepare them for the future you are buildin/
Not every message has to be negative/
If you work hard at it you commit it becomes positive/
You have families members lookin down on you from above/
But you forgot about as soon as you deceased their love/
But they are with you right by your side/
Guarding you when you are sick, scared and when you want to hide/
The world is menace and it will become you/
So take what I say and learn to love you/
For the future is the light and follow it till its no more/
And steal from the rich and give to the poor/
And end all the bullshit and strife/
Next time you try and diss a girl jus think she could be your wife/
There are but only three great ones a actor once said/
You'll know it from her smile not how she performs in bed/
Take this advice open your eyes theres ya sight/
And always remember that there is the light/

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 08:28 PM

the first part of this got me ... Its a good question ... why dont most men respect ladies and do they think with there dicks... yup.. I liked this piece. OoNnEe

Bmack 04-25-03 11:30 AM

UPPIN?? ANYONE THANKS ANGELIC

RythmicTendicies 04-25-03 11:51 AM

decent shit,

Our future's being killed off once every 7 minutes/
And our population is rising with bad intentions within it/ :)

oddly ill 04-25-03 01:19 PM

oh shit this cat got skills i read your other post and liked it and this one was even better more complex and the rhyme scheme was off the meters kid you i would say get better but if you do you'll show me up and i don't i want that so keep doin what you're doin

odd gives it
5 of 5 mics

Bmack 04-25-03 01:23 PM

THANKS ODDLY ILL THE CRITIQUE IS APPRECIATED, YOUR KINDESS IS HARD TO KILL LOL...OOPS RHYMED LOL

Saladin 04-25-03 01:48 PM

This was refreshing..
nice to see some new ill headz..
stay active playa..

peace
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