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The Light...
The light shines from above to within your heart/
The dark takes over your soul and tears it apart/ You sit back and wonder what makes you tick/ Is it your veins ventricles or your dick/ And why dont we respect the ladies? We go out to impress them with 60 thou mercedes/ Perry Ellis is to Rocawear as BIG was to Pac/ And Kurt Cobain was to cocaine as 50 to his glock/ I write a rhyme sit back to the future/ Hate goin out at night wonderin who's gon shoot ya/ This world is full of drama and lies/ If theres any left from the class of 2000 please rise/ Our future's being killed off once every 7 minutes/ And our population is rising with bad intentions within it/ Why do the good die young?/ Why should a father cry or bury his son?/ When will the races come together as one?/ And realize all this racist bullshit is done?/ You dont see Ulysses S Grant or Robert E Lee/ Or Abraham Lincoln bein a jackass on TV/ So why are we still livin in the past in agony/ And When will see the light?/ When will our mouths jus shut and try to solve the fight/ Jus look into the future and see yourself in your children/ Try and prepare them for the future you are buildin/ Not every message has to be negative/ If you work hard at it you commit it becomes positive/ You have families members lookin down on you from above/ But you forgot about as soon as you deceased their love/ But they are with you right by your side/ Guarding you when you are sick, scared and when you want to hide/ The world is menace and it will become you/ So take what I say and learn to love you/ For the future is the light and follow it till its no more/ And steal from the rich and give to the poor/ And end all the bullshit and strife/ Next time you try and diss a girl jus think she could be your wife/ There are but only three great ones a actor once said/ You'll know it from her smile not how she performs in bed/ Take this advice open your eyes theres ya sight/ And always remember that there is the light/ |
the first part of this got me ... Its a good question ... why dont most men respect ladies and do they think with there dicks... yup.. I liked this piece. OoNnEe
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UPPIN?? ANYONE THANKS ANGELIC
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decent shit,
Our future's being killed off once every 7 minutes/ And our population is rising with bad intentions within it/ :) |
oh shit this cat got skills i read your other post and liked it and this one was even better more complex and the rhyme scheme was off the meters kid you i would say get better but if you do you'll show me up and i don't i want that so keep doin what you're doin
odd gives it 5 of 5 mics |
THANKS ODDLY ILL THE CRITIQUE IS APPRECIATED, YOUR KINDESS IS HARD TO KILL LOL...OOPS RHYMED LOL
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This was refreshing..
nice to see some new ill headz.. stay active playa.. peace -1- |
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