Fuck me good
I want you badly/
I want to fuck you madly/ I want your dick in me hardcore/ so far it makes me sore/ My pussy is an ocean/ Your dick be a boat/ Common' aboard/ An' we'll make is all float/ We'll drift on da water/ We'll wave in da breeze/ So come take me now/ And do as chu please/ So ride it/ fuck me good/ You know the way you should/ Lick me inside from hole to clit/ And I will try and please you back/ From the shaft all the way to the sack/ Shit give me one more chance/ We can get together and have a little naked dance/ Forget the fat lady/ Forget all da singin'/ Cuz it ain't ovah/ Till I iz screamin'/ |
.....i could write,but im too tired...
ill let the other cats speak... |
wow, ok...seems like you like to fuck. cool i guess. not to bad. make ya barz a lil longer and i think youd be good
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i loved this ryhme for obvious reasons, u get upsfrom me, and mini me, u wanna collab?
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MY EYES, MY EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Constructive Piece......... :rolleyes: |
haha yeah enjoyed that, yo, good to see a chick come out and say it straight up hah, got me thinkin...and toey haha...
Peace Out Yo!!! |
lol i just red it. still laughing when im typing this not laughing at you. but that was tyte. lol keep up the good work.laters
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yo that was ill. especially for a chick. i hope more females come out and flow as good as you. very very dope. i like it.
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nice
That was very interesting, I see that the song really goes with your name,
-We'll drift on da water/ We'll wave in da breeze/ So come take me now/ And do as chu please/ So ride it/ fuck me good/ You know the way you should- I especially likw this part of your spit, it sounds really good, overall this rap is good, but I know you can improve on making your bars a lil longer like unfadeable said, other than that good job. |
i hope u die.. this needs to be disinfected, and burned, and put somewhere were no one can ever read this again..
DIE mother fucker DIE |
u really need to work on ur vocab
ok peice keep droppin |
That style's ill your visuals skills
My props for the you dropped :spit: |
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