"Fallen"
 

sort of an old-school style, just off the top of my head



fallen from the sky, fallen from the heart of God/
banished from paradise and envy is the cause/
walked with the angels and talked with your God/
but a tear for me is a tear to be lost/

Eve had a bite and Cain had an Abel/
Christ tried to lie but found he was unable/
so I took him with me for a good forty or so/
did he give in, the Bible says no/
but only me and the god amongst men know the truth/
but to kiss and tell is to diss and be rude/
I was there when Hitler came into power/
helped aimed two planes towards two towers/
and two planes nailed these twin towers/
I was there at bin Laden's finest hour/
I was there when Mary finally lost her flower/
I wasnt a snake in real life/
the Good Book just likes to lie/
gluttony, sloth, wrath, greed, envy, lust and pride/
these bring smiles and joy to a father's eyes/
you should sing praise to me/
cuz with out me, good could never have be/

damn...... thats all i gotta say, fuck im amazed, that was off da hook , really best i heard 4m u, damn........

p.s. check out my spit ''lookin at tommorow''

this was a nice drop. i liked it alot. i think the only thing you should try to add is more multis. keep spittin

also could you peep my shit? its called, "Growin Up"

thx for the replies
ya after re-readin it, it could have used some multies
but like i said i just felt like writin and whatever came out
came out, check out my other open mic "The Lonely Mic"
its much better, I think
and I will peep both of yas shit