just rythmin
 

Ready to get some explicet shit of my chest/
I'm ready to get infliced with shots from the rest/
already being inspected from crimes i'm gonna recommit/
my lyrical influence is just reflected for the times that i admit,/
are hard, since birth i've been blessed by ak's and 9's/
had this curse burdend around my neck - then it takes a turn,/
for the worse as i start to become a suspect in homicide/
It co-incides with my plans , although i elevate to get respect/
My minds is full of can's - no don'ts, they affect my positve,/
outlook, striaght form the projects i was took - to rise to fame/
making multiple G's in this rap game, my artistic mind detects/
a pound of home-grown-ill', I go on futher to inspect/
do anything for that weed - even kill, nine nickel, one year till the deadly shot/
for everything pac' + Biggie fought, in the end they got what they sought/
-- scratches to end...


2)My tounge spits battles like bars of war/
Some explicit content like Buggie used in '94/
Disses to xzibit and pac' got my heart in grievement/
the rap god will one day return - shady/aftermath gave me the consent/
To turn into a ja pussy-whit-bitch, gonna give me some embarrsement/
Sometimes Death row take it to far, Suge exposes advisery content/
First he had the rap martyr shot , then he endorses in canbilism/
his facination with satan gona get him sent down/

the 2nd one ain't done yet..but u get the feel...
Not the best i can do, i was rather bored so i just started writin...:)

That was actualy decent. I think it was one of your best. You dont need to try hard for the real talent to come out. The people who try the hardest most of the time are the worst. Nice Drop OoNnEe

thanx..i felt that it was my best piece to date..lol

uppin' for more feedback..