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jotoy 04-18-03 06:25 PM

something short and simple
 
for someone to be a friend
you always know what to say
when i'm feeling like crap
you say the wrong shit to make my day

but to be a friend means i can't be a friend to you
if you don't know what i mean
that's too bad for you

shiznit 04-18-03 07:39 PM

hmmm...short and simple just like what the title says...im feelin u on this...not too much vocab but its aiight..keep em commin

~RuThLEss~ 04-18-03 07:51 PM

Nice kept it short n simple with no big vocabs ....it shows u dont need big vocabs to make a tight poem...nice

peep mine

H.o.m.e.g.r.o.w.n~*~b.r.e.e.d

Phantasia 04-19-03 12:31 PM

Okay Joi get your point girl

Narcicyst 04-19-03 12:35 PM

i liked this one...wahid

KeVLaR 04-20-03 12:52 AM

nice drop... felt you through all the 7 lines...lol....

nice drop......


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