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Phantasia 04-19-03 01:07 PM

Who ever you want it to be
 
I never thought I would get tired of this ish, but I wanna break out. I’ve been sentenced to an eternity of oppression from a higher power with uncontrollable authority. Abuse of power breached with every word spoken. It’s enough to turn a sane man into a crazed maniac. Unable to be contained a fury rages inside my head, suppressed not being released. My body shakes with anxiety knowing its full capability. The authority confronted. No longer will I stand to be suppressed. No one rules me I am my own. Slowly my freedom is gained the abuse of power diminished with one single stand. Never will I be put down.

Phantasia 04-19-03 01:09 PM

I don't like what I just wrote! So if you do... Yea,okay

~Soultress~ 04-22-03 06:50 AM

Why don't you like it?
sometimes we are our worst enemy when it comes
to writing that we ourselves do..

There was nothing at all wrong with this..
you made your opinion clear all the way thru
and you stood on topic....
the flow wasn't meant to be perfect..which gives this
more of a straight from the heart feel..

stay up

~Soul~

Phantasia 04-22-03 08:46 AM

I don't like anything I write even when it's my best I was just writing. I do that a lot. Anything that has emotion to it I don't like it that is all. I was trippin


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