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Slik 04-19-03 09:27 PM

Tightbeat
 
YO!!!!
This is my verse...SLiK.....
I'm callin dis "stranger" fo now....
replies please, when read, say it out loud, it comes out better...

This life can consist of fun and danger, but to my own life, i'm considered a stranger// I dont even know what i'm doin here, but around every corner, i know theres soemthin to fear// As i walk down these empty streets, only think of raps and rhymes, and my own person beats// who knows when a shot will go off, who knows when some mothafucka will calll the cops// I consider this the ghetoo, i gotta get outta here, i'm gonna come lose and let go// fuck my life, fuck everything that goes on around me, and throw me da knife cuz this is how its gotta be// I cant go on like this, i gotta make somethin of myself, i know i can become a rap artist// Feel every word i linger, feel myheart, as if u could touch it wit ur finger// Everday you gotta express yourself, teach those other niggas, not to run dem fuckin mouths// no i cant give up, no i cant let up, even though i'm fuckin fed up// I gotta look in da future and not the past, gotta keep my head up, i gotta smile and laugh// help me, cure me, save me, learn from me, everyday this is how its gotta fuckin be// just help me see this through, just help me and my mothafuckin crew// please dont hate, dont discriminate, just fuckin learn to aprreciate// dont judge me on the outside, take a closer look and see whats inside// youll find my love and my respect, and trust me nigga this is somethin u'll never forget// cuz in this life its consists of fun and danger, to me, i'm my own motha fuckin stranger//....

PACO 04-19-03 11:51 PM

that shit was ill

AngelicSheShe 04-20-03 12:10 AM

That was some tight shit. But say do me a favor.. space your shit out more.. makes it easier to read. Nice Piece OoNnEe

Slik 04-20-03 08:45 AM

yeah sorry cuz i typed it to a friend on AIM so i copied and pasted it...sorry homies

Dadi Kewl 04-20-03 11:05 AM

Real nice man, Try spacin' it out tho But other than that its all good

Hit up my battle in the R.B.B.L against Quil-spit
Out Dawg

J3SUS CHR1ST 04-20-03 11:31 AM

I gotta look in da future and not the past, gotta keep my head up, i gotta smile and laugh//

Maaan, this peice was hot. For years now, I've been thinkin about my past and lettin shit bother me, I only found myself in bad positions. Honestly, behind this peice theres truth to alot of people, they just gotta search within it. Good luck, I also wanna say makin this an audio would be a great choice. Props and respect, you deserve it. Peace.

SmoKeyThaBear 04-20-03 08:09 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by PACO
that shit was ill



...yea..

Slik 04-21-03 09:47 AM

keep uppin, and thank you

Slik 04-21-03 10:58 AM

cmon quit sleepin

Slik 04-30-03 06:53 PM

tell me what u think...i'm makin this an audio

Bash 04-30-03 07:00 PM

Ill drop dawg , i liked da whole concept , u stayed on topic ,,,, ill wordplaY............Return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=49947

Slik 05-24-03 09:58 PM

uppin this fo mo comments...and thank you all


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