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I.TWriter 04-20-03 03:44 PM

Beware of The Boys rmx
 
this bull shit was erased

self 04-20-03 06:34 PM

what?
Put it in bar form.

SmoKeyThaBear 04-20-03 09:24 PM

yea, i cant understand it

ecentialcypha215 04-21-03 10:06 AM

i kinda caught the flow a lil but yeah just put it in bar form, once im able to read it properly then i can help you out a lil!
and try not to use niggas so much , it's not cause im white it's just it fucks the rhyme up when u say it alot try and expand ur vocab , god knows i still got a lot of work to do wit mine cause i dont have the best choice of words either sometimes, but keep it up cuz ye'll get the hang of it! one

Atetrack define' 04-21-03 10:52 AM

was aiight,but without the bar form i couldnt catch the flow,ecential is right,overuse of certain words killsa asong,just watch that in future,keep elevatin cat...
bismillah

Slik 04-21-03 10:54 AM

uhhh.....

peep mine, tight beat and home life

I.TWriter 06-06-03 12:34 PM

dam this is some old wack shit

Bmack 06-06-03 12:38 PM

So dont upp it then!

Bash 06-06-03 04:19 PM

U stold da Tittle from Jay z and Punaji MC.......

I.TWriter 06-08-03 06:50 AM

i didnt steal i just made my own version


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