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Beware of The Boys rmx
this bull shit was erased
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what?
Put it in bar form. |
yea, i cant understand it
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i kinda caught the flow a lil but yeah just put it in bar form, once im able to read it properly then i can help you out a lil!
and try not to use niggas so much , it's not cause im white it's just it fucks the rhyme up when u say it alot try and expand ur vocab , god knows i still got a lot of work to do wit mine cause i dont have the best choice of words either sometimes, but keep it up cuz ye'll get the hang of it! one |
was aiight,but without the bar form i couldnt catch the flow,ecential is right,overuse of certain words killsa asong,just watch that in future,keep elevatin cat...
bismillah |
uhhh.....
peep mine, tight beat and home life |
dam this is some old wack shit
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So dont upp it then!
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U stold da Tittle from Jay z and Punaji MC.......
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i didnt steal i just made my own version
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