"Home Life"
 

heres da flow...

In your home, ur suppose to feel security//
but this place is what really scares me//
i feel so lost, so outta place//
i feel like i dont belong here, cuz these people are a fuckin disgrace//
when i was younger, i used to get beaten//
my brother and sister would hear me scream when they were sleepin//
i dont consider my mom a real person//
cuz she still in fuckin college tryin to learn a lesson//
i dont have a home or a family//
these fuckin people dont even care bout me//
i try so hard, just so the would notice//
but they just to fuckin high to focus//
sometimes i shake at night//
thinkin bout all those beatings and fights//
i even have my name on the state record//
but my mom always says she never lifted a finger//
what im saying is comin from my heart//
what i'm saying is nothing you can tear apart//
what u need to hear is that i dont have a normal life//
what u need to see is that my only escape if my fuckin knife//

replies please

ohh maaan i wanna cry....

that touched me

:o) thanks homie, this one kinda sucks, my flow is way off..but im just lettin it out

yo nice lil drop. straight from the heart i can tell. keep ya head up and keep rhymin to help vent some of that out

alot of emotions in this piece u lackin tha flow but overall i have to say good....


Holla at tha ~WAR Lords~ if you dont have a crew

yo hit it up, thanks to everyone

was aiight silk,i seen you do bette thought foreal,but as you said,jsut lettign shit out...tighten it up and lengthen it itll be aiight.keep spitting cat.
bismillah